Grammar is a funny thing...

So currently at 75.5% through the read-through review of Lapdancing 05, but that does not necessarily give a good guage of how far I am.  For example, I just spent the last HOUR going through the story searching for words that I often use incorrectly or too much.  The two I just spent the last 60 minutes on were "upon" and "onto".  I suddenly noticed a lot of "upon" this and that's in one paragraph and when I did a search, found out I had used "upon" over 300 times in the chapter!  Now, I am sort of  my own Grammar Police, so I started a search for every instance of "upon" in the story and ended up changing 135 instances of it because I had used in incorrectly or it felt awkward in the sentence.

Upon versus Up On versus On versus Onto versus On To

And then as I was reading through the search, found several other stupid mistakes or sentences that really did not make sense, LOL.

Editing is a never-ending process.  Eventually it just comes down to whether I feel comfortable releasing a story in its current state and then changing things silently over time.  The unfortunate thing is the first read is the one people will vote upon, so I need to at least make it "right enough" to appease even people like myself who literally will stop reading a story if it doesn't flow properly.

Just wanted to write this as sort of a break as well as what goes through my mind, LOL...now back to Diamond...


Oh BTW, a few pictures have been added/removed from the photo-gallery, LOL...added a few extra descriptions after thinking about it, then had to track down some pictures to use to describe them.  Not sure if they'll make the final cut, but just a head's up, hehehe...