Monday, September 30, 2013

This weekend...Lifeguard Gets Wet

So been putting a lot of time into Director Jekyll 02 and sort of burned out a bit on it...so it was time for a change of pace.  Looking through all my stories, finally settled on Lifeguard Gets Wet.

Since it's been so long, it was mostly a review and editing mistakes I made earlier...I cannot even remember where I left off on it, so hopefully will be moving forward with it soon.  Although it would be a great candidate for the "Summer of Loving" contest on Literotica, that is ending tomorrow and if I finish this before next year, will just release it instead of waiting.

But Halloween story will be submitted Tuesday, so keep an eye out for that!  It will be the earliest DocCIS story to be released!

Friday, September 27, 2013

Changes in points of view...Director Jekyll 02

So one of the more tabooed no-no's of writing is switching perspectives in points of view.  For example, talking about he and she and describing things from more of an "over the shoulder" type of story and then switching to the perspective of a character, "I felt this," or "they did this to me."  I made an attempt at that playing around with Lapdancing 04, but a lot of people felt I rehashed too many scenes; however, I was trying to show readers the other character's perspective.

For example, describing Diamond getting her hi-tech tattoo and Nick, the FBI agent feeling her up.  Then I switched to Nick's view in the van, having him relive HIS feelings and audacity at feeling up the stripper laying before him.  Then I described him watching Diamond perform for his fellow FBI agents and his view of watching things from the surveillance equipment.  Finally, I went back to Diamond's view dancing for the FBI agents.

I tried not to just repeat, but to give character depth and THEIR own take on matters...but many people did not like it.

The reason I mention it is I'm doing the same thing with Director Jekyll, although hopefully not "rehashing" as much.  The story starts out from the husband's telling, but then switches to a more third-person view on his wife's day at work and the set-up of everything that will be happening.  After about 40 pages Word format (roughly 6 pages Literotica) I am now describing the events taking place before him from the husband's point of view.


So the question to you, the readers.  Does this bother you?  Would you prefer reading the stories from more of a third-person view or from one of the character's points of view?  And if you read into a story from one perspective, does it get disorientating reading from another's?

The main reason I do so is so as the author, I am not describing things from an omniscient view, but instead, letting you live within a character to understand them more.  I could describe how each character felt from a third-person standpoint vs. that person's feelings:

"Heather gasped as she felt the the head of Senor Chacon's cock against her pussy, moaning in lust as he slowly moved forward, the hard shaft separating her labia as he slowly pushed into her core"

versus

"I heard my wife gasp, knowing Senor Chacon's cock had made contact with my wife's body, suddenly that gasp turning into a moan of pleasure as he moved forward, knowing the head of his cock was separating her slit and entering the core of her married pussy"

Obviously both are describing the same scene, but I'd like to think there is more relayed to the reader from the husband's point of view.

But wondering on what everybody thinks.  To reiterate, not asking if you like one or the other, but if you are reading in one view, and then that view switches to another character...

I've once again posted a POLL on the site, to get everybody's views.  I'm not asking if you like reading a third person story versus a first person story, but more do you mind the change of views.

Again, I refer to Lapdancing 04 for reference, as that was the one story that comes to mind where I attempted it.  I can easily go back and change things to completely third perspective, just curious what people think...

Wednesday, September 25, 2013

So far Director Jekyll 02 today...

Woke up and had an immediate urge to work on my Director Jekyll & Ms. Hidesnothing 02 story.  Right now reviewing some of what I wrote the other day, catching a few errors, and cleaning it up, but will be working on it probably most of the day.  Taking the day off was enough to refresh my mind I guess, so we'll see how far I get.

Right now the story is about five Literotica pages long...and I'm only about 1/5th of the way into it.  Will have to see what the ultimate length is, but as I've mentioned before, I may split it into two or three parts.  Still not sure, as there were just as many naysayers for the length of Lapdancing 05 as there were people who did not mind the length...so will just have to see.  Right now more concerned with just writing it!

Have had a few people say now that I posted the picture teasers, they were looking forward to the story.  I'll be adding a few more later today if the story progresses, so will let you know when those come out!

Still no takers on speaking Spanish, so I spent a little time "doing research" yesterday and watching Spanish porn movies, trying to figure out what the women were saying.  Other than a lot of "Ay, ay, ay, ay!" and "Si, si!  Si!  Si!" I didn't get much to use...so again, if anybody is familiar with more intimate Spanish phrases, would love to know!

On a more personal note, nothing new on the job front.  I have to admit I took the first week or so as more of a vacation and didn't really look for something, so this week have been just starting to get into the job search, so again, not too worried about not having anything at this point, but starting to look a bit more intensely...

Tuesday, September 24, 2013

Hmmm...what to work on today?

After almost three days straight, I'm getting a little burned out on Director Jekyll 02.  Don't get me wrong, it's still a hot story and I'm getting to a juicy part guaranteed to be sitting uncomfortably while I write...but as I said, three days straight...  And we're talking about roughly 12-14 hours a day!  Granted not all of that is writing--a lot of time I'm searching the internet for a Spanish phrase, or some clothing, or something else to describe in the story.  This story is a challenge because it's in a different country and a different language.  That's not to say everybody will need to speak Spanish to read it, LOL...but I do like to make it somewhat realistic.

But back to the subject, not sure what I want to work on today.  Right now, nothing's jumping out at me.  I know it would be easy to get back into the flow with Director Jekyll...and that's always the fall back, but just need something different.

Have a few ideas sitting on the plate for new stories, but I've got so many stories outstanding I'd hate to start yet ANOTHER chain of stories.  It's hard enough getting chapters out on the current ones!

I do have two stories I haven't dusted off in a while--Lifeguard Gets Wet and Galactic Spy--those are possibilities as well...hmmm...  Then there are some other stories I haven't touched in a while like Extenuating Circumstances, Grim Fairy Tales, and my next Dreams sequel...

I also haven't touched my Daz3D program in a while...so maybe could work on some graphics.  I'm so far behind in loading some of the models it will take me forever, hehehe.  It's sort of the same thing as with my Skyrim story...haven't touched it because I know it will take a day just to get all my mods back in working order.  Not dreading the story, just the game, LOL.

I just may start opening stories and start reviewing them...see what strikes my fancy...

Monday, September 23, 2013

Out of curiosty...anybody speak Spanish?

Director Jekyll and Ms. Hidesnothing is taking place in ARGENTINA.  They speak Spanish...although there are some dialect differences, and I'm trying to figure out some phrases and such for some of the sex scenes.

Even trying to watch Spanish porn, I can't figure out what girls are yelling (beyond the typical "Si, Si, Si" and "Dios!"  So does anybody know some phrases I can use that are in Spanish (specifically Argentinian if there is a difference)?


Thanks all!

Director Jekyll and Ms. Hidesnothing 02

So I am humming along with the second chapter of Director Jekyll and Ms. Hidesnothing. 

I've posted a "teasers" photo album for those who may be interested in figuring out what I'm writing about, LOL.  To the right is a slideshow that is randomized...the photo album is actually in order of the story, but it's more fun to look at the slideshow and figure out what's going on  ;)

The writing is moving forward pretty well.  I've had the plot and happenings for Ch. 02 in my head for  LONG time.  Although it was outlined out, what I'm covering now hasn't even hit the outline, LOL, so I've been keeping a lot of this merely pent up inside me, so it's good to let it finally out!

The story has the same main characters as Chapter 01--mainly Heather Jacqueil-Wilcox and her husband Timothy Wilcox.  Besides their background, that's about it for the similarities between Ch. 01 and Ch. 02.  There is some good foreshadowing on the events taking place in Ch. 02, so people may want to read Ch. 01 just to fill in some of the background story, but this will be a chapter that can stand on its own, so reading Ch. 01 is not required.

Just thought I'd post my lately daily update, hehehe...  Still no job...just plenty of time  :/

Sunday, September 22, 2013

Annie and Director Jekyll...

So having so much time to myself, I seem to be updating the blog a bit more, LOL...

Last night I got a mental block working on Annie Ch. 08.  I am at a point where I know what I want, and I know what's going to happen, but GETTING there is giving me grief.  This is a good time to open the door for suggestions to all the Annie fans...

My dilemma is this.  We all know Annie's going to be nothing but a sexual plaything for the whole week she is 'housesitting.'  And I have some very involved events happening.  But what I am stuck on is what she'll be wearing during the days while the boys are at school.  I'm thinking of them having web cams set up which they can access on their phone, so I'm not as much concerned about things like that, but what I am stuck on is what she will be wearing each day.

I want something a bit extraordinary than just 'dress slutty' commands.  I've though of them pulling up a random word generator each morning and telling her she had to dress based upon some loose theme of whatever word.  I've thought about her having to wear nothing but lingerie.  I've thought about her having to walk around naked.  I'm just not quite sure how I want that part of the story to pan out...so again, if you all have suggestions, now's the time to fire away.

Instead, I turned towards my next 'Director Jekyll and Ms. Hidesnothing' chapter.  I wrote until way into the wee hours of last night, and waking up, immediately began working on it again.  It's coming along nicely in terms of setting everybody up, but with all I have planned, I'm wondering if it's going to be the length of Lapdancing 05, LOL!  Will have to see how things go...there's a lot of STORY up front, but the sex parts I have planned will hopefully make it well worth the read you have to go through until you get to them, hehehe.

Well, back to writing...it's about the only good thing coming out of this unemployment fiasco so far...

Saturday, September 21, 2013

A little of this, a little of that...

So having so much time to myself, been doing several things...mostly trying to keep my mind off being home...

Worked a little on my next chapter of Annie (yes, you read that right folks!).  It's been a while since I dusted it off, and it's almost like somebody else wrote it.  I am probably going to need to read the last chapter a bit just to get back into the swing of things, but it was fun just doing something a little different.

Also worked a bit on Lapdancing 06.  I added two completely different scenes than what I had been originally planning, so it is shaping up pretty nicely.  One part had a nice little twist to it I think some will find amusing, while another one I'm quite not sure how to play it out yet...but we'll see where my Muse takes me.

I've also added the final touches to my Halloween submission.  The working title is probably going to remain (Halloween) as I don't want the title to give away some of the oddities and "WTF" moments.  I almost want to tell people who are fans of a particular work to read it particularly; however, that would give it away.  The only hint I WILL give is it could be submitted in any of these categories:
  • Anal
  • Celebrities
  • Erotic Couplings
  • Erotic Horror
  • Exhibitionist & Voyeur
  • Group Sex
  • Loving Wives
  • Mind Control
  • Non-consent/Reluctance
  • NonHuman
  • Sci-Fi & Fantasy
 How's that for a variety of possibilities!

I also have played around a bit with my "What's in a Name" story, so have been bouncing all over the place in terms of stories...

Finally I was playing around with permissions of pictures on Google+ and got a nastygram message from them.  Apparently Google does not allow ANY type of nudity and such on their site.  I was paying around with one image and it suddenly was flagged "Inappropriate" and had to remove it.  I looked around a bit, and unfortunately will not be able to add anything even "R-rated" in the Photo Albums, so will keep it only to what I've been posting for any teasers and such.

I use Picasso for my picture database and it uploads to Google+ (obviously, since it is a Google product) and don't want to play around with anything else.  I am used to managing my photos and uploads through it, so will keep the "tamer" photos still here.  I may look around  a bit and find something for the more risque photos, but we'll just have to see on that...

Friday, September 20, 2013

[Untitled]

So I finished my editing of my Halloween submission.  And strangely, it still does not have a title, and I have absolutely no idea what to call it.

I don't want to give it away, so I can't really explain the plot.  I want to leave the "WTF?" factor in it.

Usually when I write a story I come up with a title pretty quickly, but this story I have literally been writing for TEN YEARS (yes, you read that right, I started this story a decade ago) and even now, am clueless as to what to call it.

My working title has always been "Halloween" and I may just leave it at that.  Granted the story takes place around Halloween, but as you'll see when you read it...it's much more than that...but again, without giving anything away, I may just leave it at that.

It's not the best name, but then again, it's all I got...

Wednesday, September 18, 2013

Halloween story coming soon!

So there has been a story I have worked on for at least TEN years now for the Literotica Halloween contest.  I actually finished it last year but it was too late to enter it into the contest.

The contest goes by votes, so I am asking, begging, and pleading for all my fans to vote for my story when October 1st comes around and I post it.  I'll be posting a reminder next week when I submit the story.

I don't really have a good title for the story, so will be working on that.  Typically a story title comes to me as I'm thinking up the story, but this one never seemed to find a right title.  I don't want to spoil it for everybody, so not going to hint at what it is about...  :p  It's entirely different from what I usually write, so I'm sure many of you will be scratching your heads and wondering what I was smoking, LOL....but I hope I at least kept the story line intriguing enough that everybody finds it an enjoyable read, even if it isn't as erotic as Lapdancing Girlfriend or Annie Babysites the Kids...

Lapdancing 06 moving along...soon with pics!

Having so much time to myself, I've continued working on Lapdancing 06, as well as my What's in a Name new story.

Lapdancing 06 will be covering Diamond's 'syndication party' where Mr. DeWight will basically be taking monetary investments from major people in order to finance Diamond's career at DSA.  It is going to be similar to investors investing into a race horse or a business...they pay up front and reap in the rewards later on.

And who is going to invest into such a commodity without first wanting a sample?  ;)

I am also slowly working on the picture library I use for some of the descriptions.  The problem I am running into is many of the pictures so are sexually graphic, and Blogger does not take well to sexually explicit content being public.  There will still be public pictures for everybody to see; however, I am trying to figure out if I can make the pictures "Google+ circle" only--so anybody who is part of my 'DocCIS Erotica' circle will be able to view them...but keep an eye out for that as well.

Several of you have offered suggestions on the chapter, and they are much appreciated!  Some I have already planned similar events happening in the storyline, while others are more suitable to some of my other stories...but I am definitely keeping all of them in mind!  So keep them coming!

Sunday, September 15, 2013

Lapdancing 06 begun...

So one thing about unemployment I've found is you can only look and apply for so many jobs until you reach a point where you are just sitting around waiting for replies.  So with little to do but wait, I got ambitions and started Chapter 06 of Lapdancing Girlfriend.

I already know where this one cuts off, so I am hoping it will not be as long as Chapter 05...even though Chapter 06 does cover a full week like Ch. 05, there is not as much happening day-by-day.  Then again, who knows where my must will take me, so we'll just have to see.  Right now have about 11 Word formatted (~2 Literotica) pages written...

Tuesday, September 10, 2013

Still no writing...

Today officially starts my first day of unemployment.  Yup, as expected, I was dismissed from my job.  They did not even state any reason, although we all knew it was more personality conflict with my manager than anything else.  At least they spared me the BS of making up a story on how poor my performance and whatnot was and just said I was terminated.

I'm not too worried about finding another job.  My skill sets are in high demand in the area I live in and I even have one offer already, although that is relocating and I just moved to my current area 2 years ago and don't feel like moving again...although the pay is a good incentive, I'm still looking around.

So enough of my real life problems, I mainly wanted to say that for a bit I'll be preoccupied and not writing.  Appreciate all the kind words from everybody, and this is just one of those little things in life that make it interesting...so I'm not too upset, and in fact, almost relieved.  But again, stories may be on hold a bit.

Then again, I thought of a further advancement of my current story and it may be a nice diversion, as I don't think I can spend all my waking moments looking for a job...but we'll see.  I definitely am not going to put in the time I did on Lapdancing 05, but I may take a few breaks here and there to clean up my What's in a Name story.

Speaking of Lapdancing 05, I'll end on a lighter note.  Here's one of the more recent feedback I have gotten from the story...you have to love the anonymity of the internet!
This message contains feedback for: DocCIS
About the submission: Lapdancing Girlfriend Ch. 05
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Title:  What a waste of time

Comments:  You spent all this time and energy writing this? Why?
 That actually brought a smile to my face in these troubled times in my life...so thank you Anonymous, your comments definitely made my day, LOL!

Tuesday, September 3, 2013

Not much writing going on right now...

It's been a while since I posted an update, and unfortunately there isn't much to report  :( 

Real life has once again taken a dump on me.  If you remember earlier in the year I had a bad spot going on with work, home, and everything else.  Sadly those issues never were fully resolved.  In one week I have had a close family member pass away, been notified I would be losing my job, and a couple other things that if they happened one at a time, would suck.  That they all happened within THREE DAYS of each other is a major issue I'm trying to cope with.

Obviously the death in the family has caused me to be upset, and when finding out my job was pretty much over tipped the scales into a full depression which I'm trying to stay above.

So yeah, writing has been on hold a bit until things become more stable around here.

I appreciate the kind words a few of you have expressed when I mentioned some of the issues causing writing to be on hold...and hopefully as I said, this is merely a small bump in the road and things will work out in the end!