Lapdancing Girlfriend Chapter 05 - COMPLETED

Yes, the words I'm sure some of you thought to never read are here...I have finished with Lapdancing 05!

I'm running through a Spell/Grammar check and will then send a copy off to doflam as promised, while the rest of you have to wait a few more days as I review the story and make a few final changes/embellishments.  I will let you know when it's posted to Literotica...but realize after that, THEY need to review it and eventually post it, so it may be an extra day or two before you see it on the site.

I am both happy and a bit afraid of posting it.  Happy it is done, and I do feel I gave it my best.  My fear is for some people my best may not be good enough...or that I took the story in a direction they were not expecting and do not like.  Or even that it is just too long.

Anyways, I hope you all will enjoy at least parts of it...

Looks like it will be done tomorrow...

So on the tail end of Scene 2 for Saturday.  Just have one final scene to write about and then done with Lapdancing 05, but worn out after writing all day, so need a break...will undoubtedly be done with the draft tomorrow--after that will need to do a review of the entire chapter, so it will take a day or two.  I expect to post the chapter over the weekend, and then who knows how long it will take Literotica to post it...but will keep you all apprised!

Getting down to the wire...

Scene 1 of Saturday done...only 2 more to write!

Currently at 275 Word format pages...probably about 35 Literotica pages, hehehe.  Damn this is a long chapter...

Getting closer!

Finished with Friday night of Lapdancing 05...now on to Saturday morning.  There are three scenes for this, so I may very well finish it today!

Wanted to give everybody an update...will post more as I progress....

Quick Update...not done :(

So worked on Lapdancing all day today, and now need a break.  Actually have a cramp in my hand I've been typing all day, so giving it a rest.  Diamond is still mingling at her debut party, but will pick it up after today when I recharge my Muse, hehehe.  Not stuck, just spend a lot of time looking up pole dancing moves and stuff like that to describe her dance, and spent some time putting together all the soundtrack links...

So will definitely finish this week, just not tonight...

Lapdancing Girlfriend Chapter 05 - The Soundtrack!

As I mentioned in earlier comments, several people have requested I release the Lapdancing 05 sountrack before the chapter so people could gather the songs and listen to them while reading.  This is not an odd request, as I am playing the soundtracks as I write them, and the main purpose I list all the songs is for people who want to imagine the scene to it's full potential can also listen.  It's like an interactive erotic story!

I am getting close...almost through with Friday night and moving on to Saturday, which is actually a couple main scenes...but I am so close, that releasing the soundtrack is something I need to do now, as the story is soon to follow!

In addition, I've updated the Lapdancing 05 photo gallery.  Removed a few redundant pictures I ended up not describing, as well as a few additions as the story has blossomed, hehehe.  One thing I don't like about Google+ is it doesn't sort the images by name.  Some of them are mixed up and I apologize, little I can do...

Between the soundtrack and the photogallery, it's as much of a tease as you'll get until I release the chapter...but I am looking good for the rough draft to be finished today!

Below is the soundtrack.  I've broken it down to the DAY and a slight teaser of what is happening, LOL...so hope you enjoy!



Monday

In all honesty, there isn't an music in any of the scenes for Monday, but for completeness sake, put in a placeholder  ;)

Tuesday

Limousine Ride - OK, I bet you are all wondering how music, Diamond, and being in a limousine warranted a soundtrack.  Let's just say Diamond is getting payback for a misunderstood slight in her new role..

1. Madness - Muse (4:39) - Love this song--it's actually used twice in the chapter!
2. Eyes on Fire - Blue Foundation (5:00)
3. Slut - Velvet Acid Christ (6:42)
4. Good Enough - Evanescence (5:31)

Diamond's First Photo-shoot (Solo) - Obviously nervous, the photographer puts some music in the background to allow Diamond to relax.  She's an exotic dancer, so why not have her dance?

1. Broken - Seether (4:18)
2. A Drowning - How to Destroy Angels (7:03)
3. Lost in Paradise - Evanescence (4:42)
4. Fresh Blood - Eels (4:25)

Diamond's Second Photo-shoot (Solo) - Wow, wasn't that hot?  Well then, now that Diamond's warmed up, it's time for a second set of photos.  This time, already at ease being in front of the camera let's read how she outperforms even Mr. DeWight's expectations for this set of pictures!

1. Kiss It Goodbye - Nickelback (3:34)
2. Bangarang - Skillrex (3:35) - I also like this song...it's used twice in this chapter!
3. Immigrant Song - Atticus Ross (2:50)
4. Black Betty - Spiderbait (3:28) - Hmm, I use a few songs more than once it seems...
5. Give Head If You Got It - Combichrist (4:43)
6. Mz. Hyde - Hailstorm (3:22)
7. Take My Pic - Iggy Azalea (3:12) - another one used twice...love the beat!
8. Ready to Blow - KMFDM (4:02)
9. Sail - AWOLNATION (4:19)

Wednesday

 Limousine Ride - Another punishment?  No wait, this time she's doing this of her own volition!

1. 1901 - Phoenix (3:12) - Song's great, but the video will give you an epileptic fit!
2. Whisper - Evanescence (5:27)
3. Dirty Bass - Far East Movement (3:29)

 Diamond's Third Photo-shoot (M/F Simulated Sex) - Diamond's first photo-shoot with a man.  It is a planned 'simulated sex' scene, as a lot of porn you see the couple actually is not even having sex, just making the motions--or are they?  ;)

1. My Immortal - Evanescence (4:24)
2. Whisper - Evanescence (5:27)
3. Secret Door - Evanescence (3:53) - if you haven't figured it out yet, somebody has an Evanescence play list...
4. Never Go Back - Evanescence (4:27)
5. End Of The Dream - Evanescence (3:49)
6. Hello - Evanescence (3:40)
7. What You Want - Evanescence (3:41)
8. Good Enough - Evanescence (5:31)
9. My Last Breath - Evanescence (4:07)
10. Lacrymosa - Evanescence (3:37)
11. Tourniquet - Evanescence (4:39)
12. Taking Over Me - Evanescence (3:50)
13. Like You - Evanescence (4:17)
14. Going Under - Evanescence (3:35)
15. Call Me When Your Sober - Evanescence (3:34)

Thursday

Interviews - One of Diamond's new roles is interviewing new dancers for the clubs.  This is a small scene, but it will play out in the future...

1. Pour Some Sugar On Me - Def Leppard (4:27)
2. Cherry Pie - Warrant (3:21)
3. Pony - Ginuwine (5:24)
4. Girls, Girls, Girls  - Motley Crue (4:30)

Diamond Goes Clubbing - In an effort to socialize, Diamond and her new assistant Velvet join some other workers from DSA at a club (The Avalon in LA!).  Some of these links may die fast, as Club Mixes seem to disappear as quickly as they are made...

1. With Ur Love (Digital Dog Remix) - Cher Lloyd (7:27)
2. People Like Us (David Tort Club Remix) - Kelly Clarkson (6:31)
3. As Your Friend - Afrojack (3:59)
4. C'mon (Cosmic Dawn Club Mix) - Ke$ha (6:46)
5. Daylight (Wideboys Club Mix) - Maroon 5 (5:31)
6. Closer (Sultan and Ned Club Mix) - Teagan and Sarah (5:53)
7. Party Over (Andi Durrant & Steve More Club Mix) - Amelia Lily (6:26)
8. We Are Never Ever Getting Back Together (Patrolla Remix) - Taylor Swift (3:31)
9. Locked out of Heaven (Sultan and Ned Sheperd Remix) - Bruno Mars (6:51)
10. Boomerang (Cahill Club Remix) - Nicole Scherzinger (6:35)
11. Big Banana (R3hab Remix) - Havana Brown (4:30)
12. Scream & Shout (DJ Escape Rockit Club Mix) - Will.i.am (6:00)

Diamond Plays Twister - Hunh?  Well, what else does a group of pornstars do after a night of clubbing?  They go play Truth or Dare Twister!  There is music playing in the background, but I only mention a few of the songs to set the mood...so only listing those.

•  If Today Was Your Last Day - Nickelback (4:07)

Friday

Diamond's Debut Performance - Diamond's dance routine introducing her as DSA's Official Spokesmodel.  We haven't seen Diamond dance in a while, so this is an especially sexy routine!

1. Bangarang - Skillrex (3:35)
2. Take My Pic - Iggy Azalea (3:12)
3. Wet (Dj Onur Bulut 2011 Mix) - David Guetta & Snoop Dogg (4:30)
4. 5 Star Remix - Yo Gotti (4:04)
5. Fireman - Lil Wayne (4:23)
6. Temptation - Big K.R.I.T. (3:19)
7. Candy - Far East Movement (3:58)
8. Madness - Muse (4:39)
9. Pu$$y (RohR Remix) - Iggy Azalea (3:11)
10. Bleed It Out - Linkin Park (2:44)
11. Gotta Get Me Some - Nickelback (3:41) -God almighty! Look at that body...Flickers like a sticker on a new Ferrari...describes Diamond to a T!
12. Black Betty - Spiderbait (3:28)

This weekend is my goal!

So this weekend (Memorial Day weekend in the US) is my push towards getting Lapdancing 05 completed.  I'm not going to guarantee it, but I am making every effort to get it done, as in my mind, I am a month overdue.

Originally I planned to have the chapter done by April, but with work and real life interfering, those plans got delayed.  I am on the final stages of the chapter and need to review it in its entirety before posting it, but with a four day weekend (took today off too), I have every intention of getting it completed.

I also have been working on my new story I mentioned, which I just started writing this week.  The working title is "Extenuating Circumstances" as each time the female protagonist succumbs to her depraved, wicked ways there are "extenuating circumstances" on why she agreed to act slutty.  Some of the parts are pretty cliche--let's face it, erotica has been around for ages and there are thousands upon millions of stories out there, so doing something original is difficult.  Still, I hope it entices people to fall for yet another of my series...I personally like it, but then again, I like all my stories, even the ones that don't get good comments, LOL...so I'm certainly biased.

Anyways, check back in a day or two and I'll give another update on Lapdancing 05.  As I said, I have every intention on completing the DRAFT this weekend...and hopefully the review so I can post it.  It's coming, I'm even breathing hard (first person to get the reference and post in the comments gets their choice of a rough draft of Lapdancing 05 before I post it or I will dedicate and write a scene you describe to me in the upcoming Lapdancing 06!).

Well, back to writing...

Sorry, no Lapdancing 05 this weekend...

I worked on Lapdancing 05 all day today and it being late Sunday and having to work tomorrow, it's pretty evident I won't have it done this weekend.

The reason is one I've mentioned before.  When I write, I have an outline of where I want to go and the general plot, but I let the story drive itself, my mind like a raft adrift on the ocean and able to go in any direction.

So today I started writing about Diamond's debut party on the Friday night of her week, and got through several pages when I suddenly had a thought.

That thought, turned into an offshoot of the chapter I NEVER planned, but it is going so well with the story I cannot stop.  I don't want to spoil it, but I will be making some changes to the photogallery soon, adding some of the pictures I used for ideas on this part.  Nothing too noticeable, and at first it was only descriptive stuff, but then one hot scene developed, and it's just one of those things that will make this chapter flow much better.

So, I am still on Friday night...although it's more of a recap of the week from a different perspective.  Don't worry, it's not swapping back and forth like I had done earlier and people hated, but this is one part of the story that suddenly is "right" and must be written!

Hopefully next week.  It being a long three-day weekend (yay Memorial Day) I hope to have more time!

My twisted imagination...

So in my last blog entry, the comment was made about my imagination and I was thinking of how I got my stories.

As a teenager, I read a lot of Penthouse Forums, Penthouse Letters, and the other story-line type erotica from other magazines ranging from Playboy to Hustler.  No internet then, you had to steal from your father's stash!

I guess that's where my interest in erotica first began, as I found many of the stories more exciting than the pictures in the magazines themselves.

Then the Internet came out, and I discovered the Bulletin Board System (BBS) and USENET.  And upon it, I found all the subgroups and wealth of stories under the Alt.Sex.Stories.Repository group.  I was in heaven...thousands upon thousands of erotica to read!  Granted, 75% of the stories are shit, LOL, but hey, you find the good with the bad.

After that, I was in college and engaged.  At my fiancee's urging I wrote a few stories involving her, actually promoting my twisted imagination, hehehe.  I wish I still had those stories, as one of them was over 500 pages (Word format) long.

The first story was about her getting shipwrecked on an island, it being invaded by pirates (Somali type pirates, not Jack Sparrow type, LOL), being used by them, and then the pirates in turn being overrun by the local natives, who, amazed at her white skin, kept her as a sex slave.  In the end, she was sold back to me, her fiance by the chieftain.

The second story was about her and I at a pool hall.  She was cocky with her pool skills and bet a pair of bikers her and I could beat them.  In the end, she ended up fucking both of them right there on the pool table.

And then I read Annie Babysits the Kids.

As the Internet expanded, I found more story sites, eventually settling on Literotica.com.  Although I do not necessarily agree with all their rules, it is a place to find, search, and post erotica.

I had already rewritten the first chapter of Annie as well as the second chapter, so posted them.

It was a mixed experience posting a story for the first time, making it public, revealing a little about myself.  The story got both horrendously negative comments but also others urging me on.  Many of the negative comments have since been deleted, but I still remember them.  Originally  Chapter 1 of Annie was posted on the Loving Wives section, and if you know anything about that section and its readers, you know it is full of spiteful, hateful anonymous posters who like to see a wife stray, but then be made to suffer afterwards.  Any time a husband enjoys or even merely forgives their wife for straying gets flambasted.  It is more of a women's hate group than anything I have ever seen.

So I moved the chapters to Group Sex where they remain, getting some good reviews and ratings so I thought about another chapter.

I was looking through some porn and was in a bondage-type section when the idea of Annie dressed up in a leather skirt and bustier came to me...but how would she get them?  How about the boys take her shopping!  And then I thought about her in the mall, and the entire Chapter 03 slowly panned out.

The next story I wrote (coming this Halloween) was influenced by The Lord of the Rings books and eventual movies, which, when you read it, you'll understand much better than what I just posted, LOL.

Lapdancing Girlfriend, as I mentioned in a previous blog, was based upon a Literotica forum post.  The plot of Chuck blackmailing Diamond and the FBI's involvement came from a comment from a reader who mentioned it would be interested to see Diamond try to get back at Chuck, but his domination of her overpowering even that.

When a story hits me, it is like my brain is growing and growing and growing and I have to let it out.  Many of the upcoming chapters of Lapdancing Girlfriend were thought of within the first week of starting Chapter 01.  Although the chapters evolve on their own as I write them, I have a general plot outlined on what I want portrayed in the chapter.

Such was the case this week, where my new story is budding out.  I woke up one evening after taking a nap after work and thought of the story...I have no idea where the idea came from, but I had to write it.  TWENTY-FIVE (Word format) pages later I realized I was on to something, LOL...and so spent all day yesterday fleshing out the first chapter.  It is actually 90% completed, so I will be posting it soon after Lapdancing 05.

This morning I woke up and almost a dozen different scenes flashed through my mind as I laid in bed about the new story.  I quickly got my coffee and sat and the computer and built an outline for the new story.  Yesterday I said it would only be one or two chapters.  Looking at the outline, I now have EIGHT TO TEN CHAPTERS outlined.  Ugh, another series when I still have four currently running!

I need more time.

So that's it, sometimes it is other stories, sometimes pictures, sometimes while looking through a catalog to describe an outfit I find one that would fit into a new story, other times from the Story Ideas forums, and in the end, sometimes the thoughts just come to me out of nowhere...it truly is from my imagination.

Anyways, just thought I'd post those thoughts, sorry for the long blog...but now I'm going to Lapdancing 05 and plan on spending the entire day with Diamond...

I've cheated on you...

I mentioned yesterday I suddenly woke up the other day with a new story idea.  It is along the same lines as most others, woman being initially blackmailed into doing something she would not normally do, finding out she likes it.

There are times when a story comes into my mind and I HAVE to write it down...so Wednesday I quickly jotted down the initial beginning.

Today I woke up and had to work on it a bit more...so yes, I have cheated on you all.  Instead of working on the tail end of Lapdancing 05, I worked on another story!  I'm ashamed of myself, knowing I need to get Lapdancing 05 done and posted, but this story was consuming my mind and had to be written.  It is like a huge growing entity in my mind that has to get on 'paper' before it disappears into dust.

I get that way with every chapter, which is how I know what the "next thing" I will be working on is, and this story is like that.  I am reaching a point where I'll be able to turn to Lapdancing 05, but today, this needed to be done.

I am still hoping to get Lapdancing 05 done this weekend.  It will take a few more days to review the entire massively large chapter, LOL, but then it will be posted on Literotica for everybody to condemn or praise as they see fit.

So I'm still on my loosely late schedule, but wanted to share what else I was doing.  This story is a fairly standard plot, and currently I am only thinking of one more chapter, but then again, Lapdancing Girlfriend was supposed to be a single chapter/story, LOL...and now I have at least ELEVEN chapters planned!  So you never know.

Too many stories to finish, not enough time...

Haven't had much time this week...work, work, work.

Have had a major project due at work this week so most of the week have busted my rear to get that done.  By the time I come home, I'm whipped and just want to veg out in front of the television.  So haven't had much time to work with Lapdancing 05...but I do have plans this weekend to try and finish it up.  Although this is merely a hobby and not getting paid or anything like that, I do feel like I've missed a deadline and am late, so want to get the chapter finished so I can move on to the other projects.

Speaking of which, I did fall asleep on the couch Wednesday night and suddenly woke up with a thought in my head that HAD to be written down.  It's the beginnings of yet another story.  I laid out the groundwork for it, so I'm hoping to get it fleshed out more once I get Lapdancing 05 posted.  I don't want to spoil anything for it, but it is a blackmail story that is still trying to find a good plot...and maybe there will be none, dunno yet, as it is still in its infant stages.

Again, want to get Lapdancing 05 done, and then hope to work on Skyrim and Annie afterwards, but first thing first is to get Lapdancing 05 completed!

Lapdancing Girlfriend Ch. 05 photo album updated!

(Update:  After I posted this, I was trying to organize the album and accidentally deleted it...it should be back up again!)

As doflam noted in the comments section from my last blog post the photo album of Lapdancing Girlfriend Ch. 05 disappeared mysteriously.

(For those new to the blog, I try to upload pictures which inspired the outfits, scenes, and whatnot of my stories.)

I have my albums synchronized with my computer, and this weekend while I was working on writing Lapdancing 05 I rearranged the photos to be more appropriate for the timeline of the story...as such, renaming and moving them around on my system caused them to disappear on the photo album.

I've re-uploaded the photos so they are now available (click on my profile and choose photos).

*****SPOILER WARNING*****

The pictures are spoilers (hence the above) as they show not only what inspired many of the scenes within the story, but also hints as to WHAT I am writing about.  I'm sure some of it is confusing (e.g., the Egyptian museum exhibit, LOL), but why spoil the surprise...you'll read it soon enough ;)  But hopefully it does give you all something to look at and think about while I finish the chapter!

Sometimes computers are scarey!

So I worked on Lapdancing 05 a bit more today.  I haven't written anything new, just cleaned up what I've already written--tweaking and editing the story is sometimes more involved than writing.  When I am writing I simply imagine the scenes in my head and rapidly type them as I play them out in my mind...but then when I surface out of my own writing reverie, I have to clean up the typo's, bad grammar, and then make the story readable.

I was having a hard time focusing on writing the next part of Diamond's adventures.  I know WHAT I want to write and the basic scenes of getting there, but sometimes there's a little speed bump in my head that I just can't seem to make it over.

Instead, I turned to try and completely reverse my thought process by working on another story.  As luck would have it, I chose Annie.

If you recall, I recently touted about the wonders of Office 2013.  One of those cool features is Skydrive, Microsoft's only little gift a some cloud storage space where Office saves your files.  It is offline storage, where your files (hopefully) are safe.  Hard drives and computers may crash, but Skydrive is redundant, enterprise storage so things are safe.

In fact, I installed Office 2013 on my laptop for work as well, and have been able to work on stuff across computers without having to bother with copying to a USB drive or across the network from one computer to the other and always making I had the most recent copy.  Skydrive connects to all computers, so all my data is available!

Well, I did not want my erotic stories on a work computer, so I disabled those from being available.  In fact, Skydrive copied the files locally to my machine so since it was a work computer, I deleted those as well.

Back to my story...

So I decided to work on Annie Chapter 08.  I had the prelude written, so I was mainly trying to get back into the swing of the story after two long years of doing nothing with it.  I opened up my Skydrive folder...and there was no folder named "Annie!"  In fact, I was missing HALF OF ALL MY STORIES!

WTF!

In a panic, and being an IT person, I realized I must have deleted the files off my work laptop BEFORE disengaging Skydrive...so when it synched, it synched the deleted files!

In a frantic rush, I logged into my work laptop and praying I was negligent in clearing my Recycle Bin, opened it up...to find all my stories!

Restoring the stories uploaded them to my Skydrive and now everything is back to normal.  I still need to figure out what to do about Skydrive copying files locally to my laptop, but for now, as long as I have them somewhere, I am happy.

So...back to Annie...and hopefully getting the momentum to finish Lapdancing.  I am so close to finishing, that I just need to get over this hump, write about her debut party, and then finish up the next morning.  Sooooooo close!

Getting closer!

Have had time yesterday and today to work on Lapdancing 05.  I have gotten to the point of narrowing it down to how many main scenes I need to write...and I have just finished her last photo-shoot!

Next is her debut party, followed by Saturday morning.  All said and done, there is one dance scene, an exhibitionist scene, three sex scenes, and a final scene from Dan's point of view.

LOL, that's a lot for just one evening and the morning after!  ;)  How's that for a tease!


I just now got done reviewing the last photo-shoot.  I am glad I did as I added a bit here and there, and completely changed the surroundings.  I think everybody will enjoy it...it's a little different than what I've done before, but it flows well and hell, it turned me on!

It's getting close.  Not sure I'll have it done this weekend, but going to give it my best shot...

The best laid plans...

I was hoping to spend the whole weekend on Lapdancing 05, in fact, I set aside the weekend and all I had to do was some yard work...

And then some friends from out of town surprised me with a visit.  Not knocking the company or the camaraderie, but unfortunately I only had an hour here and there to work on the story the whole weekend and did not get near as much done as I planned.  In fact, all I did was clean up a couple sections...so my apologies, but no story yet  :(

Next weekend also looks clear, but with it being the late spring/summer months, time is getting more and more difficult to spend "alone."  This was why I was pushing myself to get things out by end of April, and now I'm past my own personal deadline.

All I can say is "soon" at this point.  If I have a weekend to myself, I'll have it finished and the chapter will only need a couple rereads to fix grammar and such...so if I actually have this coming weekend to myself, it will be out next week.  But as this weekend showed, no promises...but I do apologize for the delay!

And STILL writing...

Work's been rough lately.  I get home whipped and merely want to veg out with no desire to even get on the computer.  Hopefully will have some time on the weekends, but now that the weather's gotten nicer, yard work calls and so do a bunch of other things where real life is stepping in.

Was hoping to have Lapdancing 05 done by now, but alas I am still working on her photo-shoot for Friday, her debut party in the evening, and then the wrap-up Saturday.  The light is at the end of the tunnel for me in terms of finishing the chapter, just need to squeeze out some time!

My apologies on the delays...