Friday, February 8, 2013

Lapdancing Girlfriend

Next story spotlighted is my favorite, Lapdancing Girlfriend.  This story started originally as a Literotica forum post.  It was only supposed to be a standalone story, but then there was so much positive feedback from readers, I had to write more.  This story was a combination of reader suggestions and my own twisted sense of where it would go.  As I said, it is one of my favorites and one I keep coming back to.

It is also the first story with more than a "significant other sleeps around' plot.  The Lapdancing series has slowly developed a background story which, while there is still plenty of sex, abuse, and humiliation, also has an involved plot!

Lapdancing Girlfriend Ch. 01
The first chapter in the series.  As I mentioned, it was supposed to be a standalone story, but then a few of both the public and private comments spurred me to write more, where the plot slowly developed in my head.
The story starts out with Dan, a real estate agent who hates that his girlfriend/fiancee has to strip to help pay the bills, but puts up with it.  He is torn from the sensuality of seeing his hot fiancee and knowing other men see her as well.  Picking her up one night, he suddenly finds himself face-to-face with his most hated rival Chuck.  Chuck and Dan go way back, and Chuck was always demeaning to Dan.  When his fiancee comes out, Dan pretends to not know her, as he feels slightly embarrassed his fiancee has to strip from money.  Then to his horror he finds out Chuck is interested in buying the club--and wants Dan to be his broker!  Appalled his rival may be his fiancee's boss, he still pretends he does not know her, but eventually his boss and fiancee move off to a VIP room.  As his fiancee has worked at the club a long time, Dan knows the bouncers and is allowed in the Security Room where the entire club is on close-circuit camera.  He watches in horror as his fiancee is seduced and fucked by his rival, the story ending where she is talked into signing a contract to continue working for Chuck.
The scary thing is Dan finds out he is aroused watching Chuck fuck Jennifer, ultimately jacking off to the images on the screen...
Lapdancing Girlfriend Ch. 02
Sort of "the day after" story, where we learn Chuck is actually a big-wig in the porn industry, owning a company that commonly exploits women.  They find out Jennifer's contract is too binding and that she may have to continue working for the club.  They also discover she signed a contract to do more than just strip, and in fact, become one of the leading porn actresses of Divine Silk Attractions, Inc., Chuck's company!
Jennifer goes to work early to practice, finding the place in a shambles.  There are construction workers everywhere and the club is being refurbished.  She wants to talk to Chuck about getting out of the contract and finds out Chuck is out of town, but left instructions the girls are to perform for the construction workers--and even worse, are told they must earn a high amount of tips.
The girls are appalled, but end up doing what they are told.  Jennifer gives a few special dances to the workers, ultimately being finger-fucked by one of the foremen in front of his workes.
We find out more about the contract and such, but Jennifer realizes she may be in this for good, beginning to fear her relationship with Dan is over.
Meanwhile, Dan finds out Jennifer was actually drugged with some sort of Ecstasy, explaining how she had let Chuck fuck her at the club.  This is typical of Chuck's treatment and Dan vows to get revenge somehow.
Lapdancing Girlfriend Ch. 03
This is really where the plot starts to move forward.  Dan and Jennifer continue to pretend they do not know each other, so when Dan again visits the club, he watches as Chuck convinces her to strip completely naked (something she normally does not do) and let several customers feel her up.
After her erotic and extremely physical lapdance (where she cums from a stranger fingering her), we find out there's a cop in the club who wants to arrest Jennifer!  Chuck pulls some legal magic and railroad's the cop from taking her, but the cop still wants to talk to her.  Chuck sends them to a VIP room where he tells Jennifer she needs to make the cop "happy" in order to get out of any legal issues.
Jennifer goes into the VIP room and strips for the cop, ultimately giving him a blowjob as she realizes she has become the sex slave of Chuck, not knowing how she will get free of the contract.
Lapdancing Girlfriend Ch. 04
This is a long chapter, which I originally did not even know how it would end.  The second half just came to me as I was writing, a spur of the moment thing which deepens the plot considerably!
Another day, and Dan and Jennifer go over the contract she signed, finding out it is worse than they thought.  There is no way they can possibly get out of the contract!  Jennifer realizes she may ultimately lose Dan, as she has signed her fate over to become a porn star, signing a contract that lets Chuck tell her to fuck whomever, whenever he wants.
The doorbell rings and they find the cop Jen sucked off the previous night standing at the doorway.  Speaking privately to Jennifer, he learns of her being forced/seduced into the contract and confesses he is with the FBI, looking to put Chuck away for life.  He is leery of telling her this because he knows Dan and Chuck go way back, their families even going on vacations with each other.  Jen tells the agent about Dan's hatred, and the agents is not convinced at first, but finally he talks to Dan, learning of the mental abuse Dan suffered not only in childhood, but even college.  The agent tells them if Jen is willing, she could become an informant for them and put Chuck away for life!  Beyond his porn business, they learn Chuck is a drug dealer, a murderer, a crime lord, rapist, and worse.  Both Jen and Dan realize if Chuck is put away for life, her contract worries are over, and she could easily get out of her enslavement!
Dan is reluctant to let her agree.  In order to become an informant, she would have to follow through with becoming a porn actress in order to spy on Chuck, but Jennifer says she would be forced into it anyways, at least this way there is an ending in sight.
 Meanwhile the agent is contacting his boss to let them know about Jennifer possibly becoming an informant.  The branch chief is reluctant to agree, saying the girl could "spook" at any time and blow their years of undercover work.  He tells the agent she needs to prove she is willing to do anything...
In the end, Jennifer fucks the agent in front of Dan, to prove she is willing to do whatever it takes.  The agent finally is convinced and tells her and Dan to meet him at their private headquarters the next day.  There, Jennifer is given a bunch of spy equipment, as well as being seduced and fucked by the branch chief--while Dan is busy helping out one of the computer nerds outside.  Jennifer also does a striptease for the entire task force, ending with her going home in order to fly out to Los Angeles the next day to DSA corporate headquarters where her life as an informant and porn actress is to begin.
Lapdancing Girlfriend Ch. 05
I won't spoil this for anybody, but it's becoming huge.  In the first 5 pages she is felt up by several guys, fucked by one, and blatantly shown off in front of everybody...and that's before she even arrives at the adult entertainment company's office!  This is still a Work In Progress which I am hoping to finish end of this month, although cannot promise anything.

8 comments:

  1. Doccis: I hope you get better soon. As far as your continued writing of Lap 5 or Anne. You set your own time lines. I am waiting for Lap 5 but would like a will written story rather than something rushed. As I said in a feedback to you, I would like the story to develop around Jen/Diamond's love for Dan, Chuck's seduction of her with expensive cloths and the wild night life of LA, Chuck knows that Jen is Dan's girlfriend and has Dan watch/lessen to their love making. The thrill of working for the FBI and the seduction of the danger with Agent Gieger. In the end does Diamond stay with Chuck or help the FBI and return to Dan. I look forward to Lap 5 where ever you take the story. I am not a fan of gang bang storys and would like to see Diamond pulled between Chuck, Gieger and Dan in the back drop of the strip clubs.

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    1. Thanks! I don't want to spoil anything...but she will be pulled different ways. As I mentioned below, there is one gangbang scene coming up, but that's not the norm for her...her sex will be with one or two people at a time :)

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  2. This is by far your best story. The interaction between the couple who are always committed to each other no what is beautifully written. Just a bit of advice, keep the gang bang elements out. The hottest scene is when the detective fucks her in front of dan and when dan watches on cctv as chuck fucks her.

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    1. Although there are several "group" scenes, I usually have her having sex with just one or two guys. There is a gangbang scene coming up at the end of Chapter 05 or beginning of Chapter 06 (depending on where I leave off), but if I remember correctly (flu clouding my mind atm, hehehe), there are not many "gang" scenes.

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  3. With jen becoming a famous porn star she gets attention from lots of celebrities sports stars and rich businessmen. She has to get a pretend boyfriend to keep the attention away. Will it be chuck or someone else?

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    1. That's a really interesting idea that I too have suggested to doccis. Let's see if he plans on taking it up

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    2. Hehehe, well, in fact, in Chapter 05, she DOES have to find a "fiance" as Chuck invites him to her "coming out" party where she is officially announced as the DSA Spokesmodel.

      Who will it be? :p

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  4. I really enjoy how she is still committed to Dan and how she is still reluctantly having sex with others. Can't wait to read ch 5, but i agree, don't rush it.

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