I've played around with the site a bit more to try and make it easier for people to navigate. The major change is I've added tags/labels to each post with the name of the story it pertains towards...this should hopefully make it easier for people to find news on one particular story instead of having to try and wade their way through the growing number of posts.
As a result, since some of the names are a bit long (Skryim and Annie), I've rearranged the left-hand side of things so hopefully it does not look as cluttered.
Let me know if you see anything off or have any other suggestions. I'm still a noob when it comes to Blogger, so always looking for things to make it better!
Saturday, August 24, 2013
Sex from the beginning...or stretch it out?
So I have been currently on a push by my Muse working on my new "What's in a Name?" story.
For those who missed the recap, it is basically about a former beauty pageant wife who "itches" for that lifestyle again and obtaining titles. She starts out by participating in bar contests (wet t-shirt, daisy dukes, etc.). Then I'll have her sink further into less appropriate titles (MILF, MIAF, WILF, WIAF, etc.).
I don't want to give the story away, but I'm at a crossroads where I'm wondering what people enjoy. I am getting close to the end of Chapter 01 which, not going into the circumstances too much, a wife ends up in a hotel room with another man. There is no sex involved...they went out, had a good time drinking, and both are too drunk home.
There is heavy build-up of sexual tension, but as I said, there is no sex between them by the time the chapter ends...although the guy IS scheming about how he can have sex with the wife, he doesn't follow through with anything...yet.
So I had planned on him not having sex with her for several weeks (2-3 chapters), building up the tension until it is almost a given they will have sex and it is pretty much expected.
But then I woke up this morning thinking, "What if the wife wakes up half asleep and straddles her husband and suddenly realizes it is NOT her husband!?"
Obviously she is shocked at suddenly impaled by another man's cock but it feels so good they end up having morning sex.
So my question to you, my readers, is what sounds more erotic? The sex scene is going to happen eventually, but should it be sooner versus later? Do you enjoy things being drawn out and heightening of the sexual tension, or do you like the sudden "OMG I'm fucking my husband's coworker!" surprise, LOL.
It obviously changes the rest of the story as I was going to use the slow build-up of her teasing the coworker and slowly her giving in to letting him do more and more with her, but I could probably work with her having "mistake sleep sex" with him and then him using it to leverage her into acting more slutty.
I've created a poll gadget to cast your vote, but feel free to leave comments as well--whether you have questions on the story or whatever...but I'm getting close to writing it, so want to figure it out by next weekend!
For those who missed the recap, it is basically about a former beauty pageant wife who "itches" for that lifestyle again and obtaining titles. She starts out by participating in bar contests (wet t-shirt, daisy dukes, etc.). Then I'll have her sink further into less appropriate titles (MILF, MIAF, WILF, WIAF, etc.).
I don't want to give the story away, but I'm at a crossroads where I'm wondering what people enjoy. I am getting close to the end of Chapter 01 which, not going into the circumstances too much, a wife ends up in a hotel room with another man. There is no sex involved...they went out, had a good time drinking, and both are too drunk home.
There is heavy build-up of sexual tension, but as I said, there is no sex between them by the time the chapter ends...although the guy IS scheming about how he can have sex with the wife, he doesn't follow through with anything...yet.
So I had planned on him not having sex with her for several weeks (2-3 chapters), building up the tension until it is almost a given they will have sex and it is pretty much expected.
But then I woke up this morning thinking, "What if the wife wakes up half asleep and straddles her husband and suddenly realizes it is NOT her husband!?"
Obviously she is shocked at suddenly impaled by another man's cock but it feels so good they end up having morning sex.
So my question to you, my readers, is what sounds more erotic? The sex scene is going to happen eventually, but should it be sooner versus later? Do you enjoy things being drawn out and heightening of the sexual tension, or do you like the sudden "OMG I'm fucking my husband's coworker!" surprise, LOL.
It obviously changes the rest of the story as I was going to use the slow build-up of her teasing the coworker and slowly her giving in to letting him do more and more with her, but I could probably work with her having "mistake sleep sex" with him and then him using it to leverage her into acting more slutty.
I've created a poll gadget to cast your vote, but feel free to leave comments as well--whether you have questions on the story or whatever...but I'm getting close to writing it, so want to figure it out by next weekend!
Saturday, August 17, 2013
Thanks for the replies!
Appreciate the shout out from some of you on my inquiry about whether people still come to the site now that Lapdancing 05 was published.
EVERYBODY who replied stated they visited the site more when Lapdancing was being written because they are more interested in that story than Skyrim. The Skyrim fans were more vocal during the Lapdancing 05 writing mainly so I could finish Lapdancing and start working on the Skryim story, LOL.
Right now I'm in a bit of a "rut" with Skyrim. As I mentioned I've been pretty disillusioned about getting the game back up and running. It will eventually happen, but right now I have to garnish up enough desire to do it. As such, the story is a bit on hold.
Meanwhile I've been working on several other new stories, lately my "What's in a Name" story that I came up with while writing Lapdancing 05. Right now that seems to be where my Muse is taking me the most, so have been working on it in order to satisfy that desire. Again, does not mean I'm not working on Skyrim, as I open it and work on a few sections each day, but my main thrust is getting the ideas of this current story sorted out.
I've updated the picture gadget to show some of the early pictures that are inspiring me for What's in a Name...nothing that gives the story away, but at least you can see what I've been using to describe some of the outfits and whatnot!
Hopefully once I get to a point where all the thoughts in my head about What's in a Name is finished I can turn it to something else!
EVERYBODY who replied stated they visited the site more when Lapdancing was being written because they are more interested in that story than Skyrim. The Skyrim fans were more vocal during the Lapdancing 05 writing mainly so I could finish Lapdancing and start working on the Skryim story, LOL.
Right now I'm in a bit of a "rut" with Skyrim. As I mentioned I've been pretty disillusioned about getting the game back up and running. It will eventually happen, but right now I have to garnish up enough desire to do it. As such, the story is a bit on hold.
Meanwhile I've been working on several other new stories, lately my "What's in a Name" story that I came up with while writing Lapdancing 05. Right now that seems to be where my Muse is taking me the most, so have been working on it in order to satisfy that desire. Again, does not mean I'm not working on Skyrim, as I open it and work on a few sections each day, but my main thrust is getting the ideas of this current story sorted out.
I've updated the picture gadget to show some of the early pictures that are inspiring me for What's in a Name...nothing that gives the story away, but at least you can see what I've been using to describe some of the outfits and whatnot!
Hopefully once I get to a point where all the thoughts in my head about What's in a Name is finished I can turn it to something else!
Thursday, August 15, 2013
Is there anybody out there?
Things have been quiet lately since my release of Lapdancing 05. Not only has this blog site been quiet and without comments, but even private emails and comments on Literotica have dwindled to nothing.
There is usually a quiet period following a release of a story once everybody who is interested in it has read it. Lapdancing 05 has had over 20,400 views and is sitting at a steady rating of 4.77 (135 people out of those 20,000+ voted).
Just wondering if people have dwindled away or are still checking the site. The anticipation of a new release obviously had many people checking the site almost daily, but now that things have quieted down and a new Lapdancing not expected until a couple more stories are published, I'm just wondering if people are still checking the site...
It's quiet...too quiet! :)
There is usually a quiet period following a release of a story once everybody who is interested in it has read it. Lapdancing 05 has had over 20,400 views and is sitting at a steady rating of 4.77 (135 people out of those 20,000+ voted).
Just wondering if people have dwindled away or are still checking the site. The anticipation of a new release obviously had many people checking the site almost daily, but now that things have quieted down and a new Lapdancing not expected until a couple more stories are published, I'm just wondering if people are still checking the site...
It's quiet...too quiet! :)
Saturday, August 10, 2013
Been working, but not on what I promised...
I've been having an extremely hard time getting involved in my Skyrim story. I don't want to just skim over it and hand out any crappy story, wanting to take some time in it and flesh it out a bit more.
When I write the Skyrim story I'm also playing the game...so whenever there is dialogue or an attack or anything in the game, I write it down in the same order and sequence as the game. But there are the 'other' aspects which need a bit more creativity. The main plots follow the game--that of the Dragonborn. But Cerise is so much more than that and I do not want the plot in my mind to get overshadowed by just putting out any story.
So it's been difficult getting my Skyrim muse to help out...
Instead, I've been looking at a few other stories, and lately have been working on one I left out in my previous discussion in my growing list of To-do's.
This story is currently entitled "Sister Cassandra" and is a sci-fi, paranormal, post-apocalyptic story (quite a mouthful there, LOL).
The premise of the story is everybody gets 'three chances' to redeem themselves to decide whether they end up in Heaven or Hell...so there is a bit of karma and reincarnation involved. If your first life is bad, and your second life is good, you get a third chance to compensate--the end result deciding if your soul goes to Heaven or Hell as you are weighed upon the Scales of Justice. Of course there are the purely evil and purely divine who only need two lives (or in extreme circumstances, one) to decide their fate, so not everybody gets that triumvirate of lives...
Enter our protagonist, a woman who was a devout nun in her first life back in Medieval days, and in her second life, became a murdering prostitute/stripper. With her two lives she has completely nullified both her good and bad 'points' to decide where she goes. She is a true neutral.
She is reincarnated by an Angel and Demon pair during the seven-year wait before the battle of Heaven and Earth (Armageddon) to discover there is a third 'player' involved with the coming war, which wants neither Heaven nor Hell to win, but instead replace both factions. This third faction is composed of both Angels and Demons who are disenchanted with the extreme views of God and Satan and prefer more of a 'neutral' rule where they can control mankind and coexist.
As a true neutral soul, she has the inherent capability to enter both Heaven and Hell zones, so is 'recruited' by both Heaven and Hell to thwart the third faction, allowing the true battle of Armageddon to decide the outcome.
So you may ask, where is the eroticism of the story? Well, we come to find out she is brought back into the world as a succubus. The reasoning behind this is the only 'middle-ground' between Demons and Angels is of a sexual nature. Only God and Satan have true control over a person's soul, so in order to circumvent the 'system' they had to infuse a true neutral with the essence of both good and evil...and thus our protagonist was 'born.'
True neutrals are rare--in fact, there has only been one other true neutral in the existence of Heaven and Hell, and that is God. God created everything on pure neutral terms to let everything just 'pan' out--it was not until Lucifer fell and the Holy Spirit and finally Jesus came into play that 'good' and 'evil' lines were drawn.
As true neturals are basically non-existent, this gives our protagonist an 'edge' no other side is expecting, allowing her to pose as both an Angel or Demon.
I plan on the story following her as she is directed to destroy the third faction in both past and present, using her sexuality to seduce and ultimately destroy those who would fuel the third faction.
She is given several 'powers' besides feeding off sex:
The story is an attempt to "branch out" from the basic stories I've been doing and try something different. Sort of a whimsical way of venting my creative juices, LOL. It's also an attempt and sideline project when I'm stumped at my current story (e.g., Skyrim at the moment, Lapdancing 05 previously) to 'clean the slate' in my mind and work on something different.
I'm hoping this will purge the mental impasse I'm having with Skyrim to get the story on the go once again. It worked with Lapdancing 05, so we'll see how it goes!
This is also one of the first stories I thought about doing 3D Graphics on...long before thinking about Diamond or Annie, as I always had a thing for the "nuns with guns" mentality, LOL, so thought I'd bring it to fruition!
Still plan on continuing with Skyrim, just need this mental diversion to get back on track...
When I write the Skyrim story I'm also playing the game...so whenever there is dialogue or an attack or anything in the game, I write it down in the same order and sequence as the game. But there are the 'other' aspects which need a bit more creativity. The main plots follow the game--that of the Dragonborn. But Cerise is so much more than that and I do not want the plot in my mind to get overshadowed by just putting out any story.
So it's been difficult getting my Skyrim muse to help out...
Instead, I've been looking at a few other stories, and lately have been working on one I left out in my previous discussion in my growing list of To-do's.
This story is currently entitled "Sister Cassandra" and is a sci-fi, paranormal, post-apocalyptic story (quite a mouthful there, LOL).
The premise of the story is everybody gets 'three chances' to redeem themselves to decide whether they end up in Heaven or Hell...so there is a bit of karma and reincarnation involved. If your first life is bad, and your second life is good, you get a third chance to compensate--the end result deciding if your soul goes to Heaven or Hell as you are weighed upon the Scales of Justice. Of course there are the purely evil and purely divine who only need two lives (or in extreme circumstances, one) to decide their fate, so not everybody gets that triumvirate of lives...
Enter our protagonist, a woman who was a devout nun in her first life back in Medieval days, and in her second life, became a murdering prostitute/stripper. With her two lives she has completely nullified both her good and bad 'points' to decide where she goes. She is a true neutral.
She is reincarnated by an Angel and Demon pair during the seven-year wait before the battle of Heaven and Earth (Armageddon) to discover there is a third 'player' involved with the coming war, which wants neither Heaven nor Hell to win, but instead replace both factions. This third faction is composed of both Angels and Demons who are disenchanted with the extreme views of God and Satan and prefer more of a 'neutral' rule where they can control mankind and coexist.
As a true neutral soul, she has the inherent capability to enter both Heaven and Hell zones, so is 'recruited' by both Heaven and Hell to thwart the third faction, allowing the true battle of Armageddon to decide the outcome.
So you may ask, where is the eroticism of the story? Well, we come to find out she is brought back into the world as a succubus. The reasoning behind this is the only 'middle-ground' between Demons and Angels is of a sexual nature. Only God and Satan have true control over a person's soul, so in order to circumvent the 'system' they had to infuse a true neutral with the essence of both good and evil...and thus our protagonist was 'born.'
True neutrals are rare--in fact, there has only been one other true neutral in the existence of Heaven and Hell, and that is God. God created everything on pure neutral terms to let everything just 'pan' out--it was not until Lucifer fell and the Holy Spirit and finally Jesus came into play that 'good' and 'evil' lines were drawn.
As true neturals are basically non-existent, this gives our protagonist an 'edge' no other side is expecting, allowing her to pose as both an Angel or Demon.
I plan on the story following her as she is directed to destroy the third faction in both past and present, using her sexuality to seduce and ultimately destroy those who would fuel the third faction.
She is given several 'powers' besides feeding off sex:
- She can travel through time with the help of her 'overseers' (the angel and demon who awoke her), to stop events from happening that would favor the third faction. This is one of the inherent 'perks' of being truly neutral--not even Angels or Demons can travel through time as the 'rules' were made to stop all but a true neutral (which at the time, was only God). As such, she can actually change the course of events to favor one side or another.
- She can only be killed by a demon or angel, but even then, as she is a true neutral, they cannot truly kill her. When time advances she will still be reincarnated from the beginning...so even thought she is killed in the past, her rebirth is unimpeded and she can go back in time again with the knowledge of how to avoid her death.
- She has been instilled with the knowledge of the past as well as how to use any weapon from the past, so when she travels back she can be immediately acclimated to the time and place she is inserted.
The story is an attempt to "branch out" from the basic stories I've been doing and try something different. Sort of a whimsical way of venting my creative juices, LOL. It's also an attempt and sideline project when I'm stumped at my current story (e.g., Skyrim at the moment, Lapdancing 05 previously) to 'clean the slate' in my mind and work on something different.
I'm hoping this will purge the mental impasse I'm having with Skyrim to get the story on the go once again. It worked with Lapdancing 05, so we'll see how it goes!
This is also one of the first stories I thought about doing 3D Graphics on...long before thinking about Diamond or Annie, as I always had a thing for the "nuns with guns" mentality, LOL, so thought I'd bring it to fruition!
Still plan on continuing with Skyrim, just need this mental diversion to get back on track...
Monday, August 5, 2013
Not much of an update...
This past week has been hellacious...haven't had time to work on any stories which is typical for this time of year between family, work, and other real life stuff. Fall things usually calm down so I'm hoping to work on my Skyrim story soon as well as some graphics to get things illustrated. Have dropped a huge wad of money on graphics stuff, so want to at least show something for it, LOL!
Been getting a lot of questions on when things will be released, and as mentioned, when they're done. Until I have some alone time to write, things are always sketchy time-wise in the summer, but hope to start again soon...all depends on how real life goes...
Been getting a lot of questions on when things will be released, and as mentioned, when they're done. Until I have some alone time to write, things are always sketchy time-wise in the summer, but hope to start again soon...all depends on how real life goes...
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