Yes, the words I'm sure some of you thought to never read are here...I have finished with Lapdancing 05!
I'm running through a Spell/Grammar check and will then send a copy off to doflam as promised, while the rest of you have to wait a few more days as I review the story and make a few final changes/embellishments. I will let you know when it's posted to Literotica...but realize after that, THEY need to review it and eventually post it, so it may be an extra day or two before you see it on the site.
I am both happy and a bit afraid of posting it. Happy it is done, and I do feel I gave it my best. My fear is for some people my best may not be good enough...or that I took the story in a direction they were not expecting and do not like. Or even that it is just too long.
Anyways, I hope you all will enjoy at least parts of it...
COMPLETED PSHHHH you playing with us lol
ReplyDeleteI think doflam will soon attest to the truth of my statement ;)
DeleteMaybe he/she would be wiling to e-mail me a review I'll post as a blog entry!
Mwahahah, I have the chapter and you poor fools will never read it!
DeleteTime to read! Will post a short review if I finish it before the actual release, and no, I will not share it with anyone, so dont bother to ask.
LOL, if you write a long review, e-mail it to me and I'll post it as a main blog entry ;)
DeleteSo going through I'm finding a LOT of minor errors and grammar issues. It's been a while since I reread the beginning of the chapter, so making changes as I go. Some tense changes and whatnot to make the story flow better.
DeleteAlmost embarrassed by some mistakes doflam will see with the draft copy, hehehe...
Good to hear and dont worry about going off in new directions all the best stories surprise you, shock you and give you ideas you wouldn't have thoiught of yourself , in my opinion thats half the fun
ReplyDeleteThanks. Still, I'm real enough to know there will be some people who don't like it for various reasons. Then again, I write for my own pleasure, so unless it is CONSTRUCTIVE criticism, I typically ignore/delete the comments
Deletewell thanks for getting to this stage from all your blogs you have put a lot of effort into the opus that is chapter 5 and it is appreciated
ReplyDeleteYeah, I haven't put as much effort in any of my other stories like this one...so will be interesting to see the general comments and voting on Literotica to get an idea what people think...
DeleteLooking forward to reading it. This is like waiting for the book in the Game of Thrones series.
ReplyDeleteReally looking forward to chapter 5 :-) I think you have deserved a nice long relax after this marathon!
ReplyDeleteBut then Again - not too long. We still need a wrap up to the story ;-)
Bwt. the other story you wrote about in a different post - the old one with the pirates - any chance we will get to see that one on Literotica? It really sounded hot!
Well, no rest yet as I still have to review Lapdancing 05 before I release it this weekend, but it all depends on where my Muse takes me on if I'll be writing something immediately or take a break.
DeleteI've promised the next chapter of my Skyrim story after this is posted...and then Annie...and by then people will be screaming for Lapdancing 06, LOL!
As to the pirate story, will have to see. I wrote that over 20 years ago and it got lost over time...so I would literally have to recreate it from scratch. I remember the general twist of everything, so maybe it will resurface when I am in a slump and need something for a change of pace!
I am looking forward to reading your many many words and wish you continued prolificacy in all your tangents.
ReplyDeleteThanks! I hope everybody enjoys it! Slowly going through the review now, so will have it posted by the weekend!
DeleteWhooohooo!!!
ReplyDeleteThis is great news!!!
Hows the review going? smoothly or have you been drawn into many changes.
ReplyDeleteNot a lot of changes, but I'd say every other paragraph I'm changing something or finding something that would go past a spellchecker (e.g., typing "as" instead of "was" and things like that). Nothing exactly has changed thusfar, but only on Monday. Going slow because I have family in town and so really only have early morning to sit down and go over things...
Deletelol I was just reading through this blog entry, so you are afraid that people may find this story too long mmmmmmmmmmmm they could just pause half way and finish later hahaha personally I like the depth you bring. Although like all your fans ive needed to learn to have the patience of a saint.
ReplyDeleteare we there yet are we there yet are we there yet are we there yet ..........wait I mean have still got to learn the patience thingy lol.
Oh, I am VERY real in that there will be some negative criticism over the length of the story. I've had people already complain that other chapters in both Lapdancing and other stories were 'too long' so this one being the LONGEST chapter I've written is undoubtedly going to get some negative comments.
DeleteI agree with you they can pause and finish later. For some reason people feel compelled to read it all at one sitting, hehehe. Hell, I did not even WRITE it in one sitting, so good luck with that! ;)
As to the patience, I both apologize and don't apologize. Writing these is a hobby of mine, and until somebody sending me a check I'm not compelled to even finish any of the stories. That they bring me my own sense of accomplishment is enough for me...but nothing's 'forcing' me to do anything. But I do feel a sense of commitment to my fans and that keeps me going as well.
And God, I'm not even through Monday on the review...hopefully will get it done today, but with family in town only mornings are free...
so hows the review going??
ReplyDeleteActually slower than I'd like. I'm still reading through Monday for her. I can't believe some of the mistakes I've made in terms of grammar and such. I'm almost ashamed that doflam is reading it, LOL...and I think the final version will read a lot better.
DeleteI've been cutting out some paragraphs that are more-or-less repeats of previous paragraphs, entire sentences, and even rearranging a few paragraphs, so there's actually quite a bit I've changed. Doesn't change the plot or anything, but definitely makes it more "readable" and flow better.
Do you have a beta editor? if so then you should let them check for grammar and spelling mistakes and flag any strange sentences or constructions. I know for a fact that a writer is a poor choice to edit his/her own work as they tend to over think everything.
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