So most of this past week been working on Lapdancing 06 (and there was much rejoicing, LOL). Actually been cleaning up what I already have written, and now forging into new territory. This chapter will have a section for Dan, a little of Mary, and a whole lot of Jen/Diamond.
Most of the chapter will be building up to the syndication party where Diamond will be bid off like a broodmare, hehehe...and then will end with the party. Still not sure how long it will be, but it won't be as long as Lapdancing 05 was, even though this chapter also covers a week.
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ReplyDeleteIn fact!!!! HELL YES (LOL)
ReplyDeletePace yourself! Two posts in an hour (and the only two too), when you're likely to wait a fair bit of time before any story is released makes me worry about you! :-)
ReplyDeleteBut good news! Hope you don't make in an all out hardcore fuck-fest / orgy! Enjoy the teasing parts and how she slowly gets drawn in, her body making decisions for her (like the shower at the end of ch. 5) - and the scene in the office in ch. 3 and the livingroom table scene in the Annie series are among my own favourites, so I hope for more along those lines! Not making her a complete cum-dump for anyone with a the green... not all the time atleast! :-)
Well, the story does build up...but hopefully it will entire people even in the beginning ;)
DeleteThat's great. Not sure if Gooner agrees but the thing about Diamond is that she shows remorse and regret (like crying after the shower scene) so it makes her less of a cum-slut. Her not being happy about what her body enjoys makes her very different from Annie. I hope she stays this way. I think this makes me feel and sort of still look at Diamond with some dignity (or sympathy for her behaviour).
DeleteAnd this is one of the things I want to remain distinct between Annie and Diamond. Annie is succumbing to being a slut, and has actually gone out of her way for some strange (can't get that South Park episode out of my head, LOL)....while Diamond may be enjoying it at the moment, but afterwards she is remorseful; beforehand she is reluctant.
DeleteIt's a distinction between the two stories I am trying to maintain...and we see much more of that in Chapter 06 :p
Guess you have to get through Canadian puberty at some point :-)
DeleteIt seems like the overall theme of the story will remain as it has been (that's all I was trying to say!) And I feel that Jen/Diamond is feeling remorse over and fighting her own body too, how she reacts and also how suggestible she becomes (e.g. the comment about how Dan would break bad news after she'd reached orgasm) - interested to see what happens going forward as the Diamond persona comes out more often, almost one full week now already! Annie did succumb to it, but will enjoy seeing Jen fighting Diamond, and how she does so (being pressured from all sides too? Chuck, the feds and so on...)
Looking forward to seeing whatever you end up with!
Yeah...have been waiting for this!
ReplyDelete��Teasers please....have been waiting n silent agony....
ReplyDeleteHehehe, right now I don't have any teasers...it's still early...but they will be coming!
DeleteLooking forward. Hope you enjoyed the Von Gotha comics I sent some time ago. :)
DeleteHehehe, not only the ones you sent, but others have sent things as well for suggestions! It all goes into the Collective, LOL...whether it's used on Lapdancing or another story, I keep it all as possible plots ;)
DeleteDoccis: Glad to hear that you are working on Lap 6, Look forward to when you post that chapter. As I have explained before my main interest of this story is the continuing involvement between Diamond & Chuck with Dan watching from the side lines. It sound like your future chapters are going to be a interesting read. How the FBI, Mary and the strip club people play into the story line will be worth reading.
ReplyDeleteI am heading south for the winter, spending the weekend in the Atlanta GA. area.
Lived in the Hotlanta area for many many years...so enjoy your stay!
DeleteChapter 06 adds a nice twist with everybody you mentioned...so hoping it comes out sometime before Xmas, LOL...
Didn't expect another chapter of Lapdancing...can't wait to read this one...the last one was so hot.
ReplyDeleteWell, it's what's been keeping my interest the most lately. Can't make any promises on a date it will be released, but definitely been building up steam with it!
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