Good Girl Gone Badder completed!

It took longer than I wanted, but I finally finished the draft of Good Girl Gone Badder, the second book in my Good Girl Gone Bad trilogy and have sent the copy off to my two volunteer editors!  I am hoping to have the edits back by US Thanksgiving (end of November) and get the book published in December.  Before that, I will be putting the book on pre-order, as well as putting GGGB1 on sale for a limited time...will announce when that happens.

This past weekend I turned my sights on Lapdancing Girlfriend 06 (and there was much rejoicing).  I'm going through the entire chapter, so for those with access through the Patreon site, expect to see plenty of updates!   Once back in to the swing of things, I'll be finishing the chapter and turning my sights upon Annie Babysits the Kids (and there was more rejoicing).

I'm also busy working my graphics, and would like to get GGGB1 Illustrated out early 2018.  I need to look in to whether I need to IBSN that version or not, as well as some of the finer details of releasing it to a secondary avenue from Amazon, but those are minor things compared to the mountain of work to get the illustrations done.

I know it's been a while since I posted, and apologize.  The last month was pretty hectic and I pretty much did nothing--writing or graphics, but finally back to everything, so expect to see some updates somewhat regularly again!

Update (finally!) 10/03/2016...

It's been a while since the last update (a month to be precise).  For those who have followed me for some time, you know summers are always bad...both for writing and for updates.  Between family, bumming, vacations, and just the general hub bub, things move slow.

But Fall is now upon us!

This weekend I took a good dent out of Good Girl Gone Badder (GGGB2).  The second book in the series is about 2/3 done, so have passed the halfway point.  I am now on the last "major" scene of the book, so I'm hoping things will be wrapping up on the first final draft this month and I can get it "editorialized" and hopefully have something to publish for November.

In addition, as I needed a break from Katie, I looked through to see what struck my Muse's chords and did some overhaul on What's in a Name...so the higher tiers have that to look through as well.  Not much changed, it was mostly grammar and revising some paragraph structures, but it's a lot "cleaner" than before and hopefully flows better.  Won't be focusing on that story for a while, just needed to clear my head for GGGB2.

I've also updated all the GGGB1 graphics for the various Patreon tiers, so you should see a bit more in terms of teasers for the upcoming illustrated version of GGGB1.  That book will come when it comes, not going to rush it, but it's coming along nicely...

Once I get GGGB2 done and waiting for the editing (which will be done by somebody else), I plan on focusing on Lapdancing 06 and Annie 08.  I'd like to get both done by the end of the year.  I HATE giving out ETA's, so don't hold me by that, but I know Annie has waited longer than most to come out (so much the play list I have for her is out-dated, hehehe), so am trying to get my immediate plate clear to give her some loving (hell, if the story were real-time, she'd be old and grey by now!)  ;)

Again, now that we're in the Fall, that has been historically my most productive times of writing, so hoping you'll see a lot more movement on things, and sorry for the lack of communication this past month!

Introducing Suzanne Carter (née Simmons)

One of my goals has always been to publish ILLUSTRATED versions of my stories.  I've always posted the FREE text versions online, so feeling that pulling them and beginning to charge for them was an injustice to those newly discovering the stories on Literotica, I thought changing them enough such that they were illustrated would draw in both old fans and new.

It has been suggested my newest story, Extenuating Circumstances which involve Suzanne, Jen' (aka Diamond from Lapdancing Girlfriend) I publish straight out and skip posing on Literotica.

So I'm torn...  Waiting to publish Extenuating Circumstances means a delay in posting anything.  I am still working on finishing up my Lifeguard Gets Wet story...as that will be illustrated by an artist who has requested it as a commission...but not sure what to do from there.

Lapdancing Girlfriend 06 is somewhere between 75-90% completed (honestly don't remember where I left off as my attention has been on Lifeguard)...so it would be the next one to follow being posted on Literotica if I hold off.

But curious what you all think.

Writing is a hobby, as such, I devote limited time to it.  If I start getting paid for published works, that would give more incentive into putting more time into it as I would have it as additional income.  But I know it's been a year now since I published anything and people are getting antsy.

Curious to hear what you think!

In the meanwhile, I've been working on prototypes for Suzanne and her illustrations which I want to do with EC.  Starting new and fresh with a story not yet published means I can tilt the story to help out the illustrations and vice versa.  If I go back and illustrate one of my existing stories, some things will need to be changed (outfits, colors, and the like) in case I cannot find something similar to illustrate.

But here is the first reveal of Suzanne Carter (née Simmons)...so let me know what you think!  To pull the description from the story:

Looking for any reason to distract her thoughts, Suzanne looked at her reflection in the mirror behind the bar.  What she saw was not the normal, care-free, and somewhat straight-laced twenty-four-year-old she was used to seeing, a woman happily married and living in a nice gated suburban neighborhood.  The woman looking back at her from the mirror was a complete stranger, the opposite of everything she had been.  The woman in the mirror across the bar was dressed for sex, her long wavy ‘bronde’ hair cascading over her shoulders and resting upon the unconcealed swell of flesh at her chest, her breasts bulging and practically hanging out of her immodest cocktail dress.

The satin black dress hugged her body like a second skin, leaving little to the imagination.  The deep neckline unashamedly exposed more of her natural 35C fleshy mounds than she was comfortable with—but once again she had little choice in the matter.  The dress was held gingerly to her body by two thin straps, and without them, the dress would have left her half-naked, the back of the dress completely opened down to the soft swell and ‘Y’ of her ass.

Entering "the grind" LOL

All this week I've been pounding upon the rough draft of Extenuating Circumstances 0101, editing the rough draft and then transcribing it on the computer (as I cannot take digital copies into work).

Last night I got home and needed a break, so blew off the dust (figuratively) on What's in a Name? and starting re-reading that.  Sometimes I wonder what the hell I'm smoking when I read some of these as I ended up almost rewriting half the paragraphs.  The general gist of the story remained the same, but the grammar and run-on sentences made me wonder if I actually wrote them, hehehe.

So things are moving forward with EC0101, as well as working a bit on some old stuff for a change of pace.

This weekend I plan on putting the nose to the grindstone on EC0101 and getting all my edits transcribed.  There's still half the story I need to edit, but if I can get this mound of scribbles transcribed I'll have hit a major milestone in my goal to get at least one story out this year!  Of course, with the holidays, who knows what can happen.  Supposed to meet some friends for lunch Saturday, have another friend who may call on me to work with them over the weekend, as well as getting the house ready for my kids to visit come Xmas.  Still, I want to get EC0101 through its paces so hoping to get some time to work on it as well!

Just letting you all know where I'm at.  I still am not giving an ETA on anything, but do want to let people know what's been going on and that I've not let things slide any more than they have!


Oh, and one other thing...there have been a few inquiries on posting images for EC0103 (third part of Ch. 01).  The main reason I have not is that entire part of the chapter is all sex, so any images I have for "inspiration" can't be posted publicly...so you'll just have to wait on that  ;)

Update...

So there really isn't much to update.  From my previous post, I was rather disconcerted about some people's attitudes and did not do anything.  Probably the worst thing to do is piss-off/annoy the author, as I was definitely in no mood to write or even work on my graphics.

This weekend I spent the entire time playing The Elder Scrolls beta...and had a blast.  I had no interest in doing anything creative, so basically took some time to myself.

Now that the beta weekend is over, I am feeling ready to give things a try again...so hopefully nobody's going to chew me out over things taking even longer...because that just causes them to go even further.

On the job front I got and accepted the latest job offer...which is substantially more salary than any of the other offers that fell through.  This one is pretty much a done deal, so hopefully once everything goes through HR and such, I could very well be working by the end of the month.  Appreciate all the prayers and kind words during this time...but I need to get back to work, hehehe (never thought I would say that, LOL!).

And now for something completely different!

Burned out...

I mentioned around Christmas I had gotten burned out writing Lapdancing 06 and working on the Christmas graphics I posted.  When that happens, I usually don't need to stop writing or stop doing graphics, I just need to do a complete change of venue.  In terms of writing, that was starting the new story I have mentioned already--Assumptions. 

That story has changed over the last few weeks both from reader feedback and my own thoughts.  Now, although the basic scenes and such are similar, the story is a lot more obscure in terms of who the husband actually sees having sex.  I am being very ambiguous--at this point, it may be the wife, it may be one or more of her sorority sisters...nobody knows.  The "assumptions" in this case apply to both the husband and the reader.  I am still not sure how I'm going to end it, LOL--originally it was about a husband who catches his wife fooling around, but now...even I am not sure of the final outcome!

3D Graphics Muse...

In terms of graphics, I also needed a different venue.  When I get into burned out moods like this, usually it is due to writing, so I typically start trolling the Literotica forums as well as doing random story searches. 

In doing a random search on Literotica, I struck a proverbial gold mine!  I found a story that was whimsical (the mood I needed at the time), completely unbelievable (which is opposite to what I write as I strive to make my stories believable), and something to give me a topic to do some images to practice with.

Now for some FYI type information.

I have mentioned in the past I am thinking about creating illustrated versions of my stories--once I actually FINISH one, LOL.  The general feedback from you, the readers, has been favorable towards offering an illustrated purchasable version of the stories where I can give my own vision of how I envision the scenes. 

Looking around the internet, such stories typically range anywhere from $5.00-15.00 (US).  I would probably be looking on the lower end of things, but it all depends on how things go, how much time it takes, and if there are any initial fees involved in making such productions.

As I am fairly new to the 3D Graphics arena, I want to get some practice and perfect my artistic talents before I expect to charge money for anything I create.  The more images I can do, the more tricks I can learn.  I'm hoping some people may know a thing or two about graphics and photography who can give me feedback, I'm open to any and all suggestions.

My Graphical Inspiration.

So as I mentioned, I found a story on Literotica I decided would be a good practice for illustrating a story.  Enter the world of Brandi Vavoom by GeorgeTasker.  Brandi is a B-movie starlet who is the epitome of a big-breasted blonde bimbo, LOL.  The story starring her is Crooked Cops and Counterfeit Jugs (and Chapter Two). 

I found the story quite humorous and inspirational.  In fact, I've actually started a second story adding to the world of Brandi Vavoom (I have several ideas!).  I requested to continue the story from the original author, although I have not heard back from them, also mentioning I was interested in illustrating his story.

The reason for my interest is I am always looking for something new to test my writing skills on, and the world of Brandi is completely different from my normal type of stories.  In my stories I try to be somewhat believable; however, in Brandi's world, not only is she stupid (sucking a stranger's dick as a sobriety test?) but willing to do what it takes to be the best actress she can (anal sex!).  Hence the whimsical portion, LOL. 

I thought it would be a good diversion to go with the flow instead of having to think about realistic situations the protagonist would get thrown into, so decided to try and illustrate the above stories and see how it would go and how long it would take for practice and experience.

A little about 3D Graphics.

Before I post all the pictures of the story, I should talk a little about 3D Graphics.  The program I use is Daz Studio, a free graphical package.  The other type of software similar is Poser, which is a purchasable product.  Although free, DS offers as many options as Poser, and some decent images can be gleaned from it.

Whether using Poser or Daz Studio, the basic thing to know is there are different "base" figures you can use to start your character off.  I am only interested in the female characters, so will review the most popular ones:

• Victoria

Victoria is the most widely used character base for both Poser and Daz.  There have been several iterations of Victoria, the most popular being 4.2 which was released around 2008.  Victoria is a character created by the makers of Daz Studio, and the most current version is Victoria 6...but by far the most items, clothes, etc. are based upon V4.2.

Victoria is basically the most "realistic" model for most fantasy, gothic, steampunk, and regular graphical renders.  You load your base V4.2 model, then add your textures (for skin, hair, eyes, etc.), then the morphs for head/face looks and body types, then clothes, then props, then background, etc. etc.  There are HUNDREDS of different morph packages out there, so you buy what you want for characters and such, but Vickie 4.2 is the most widely used for "real" type images.

• Aiko

Aiko is Daz 3D's answer to an anime character.  The girls have larger eyes, bigger heads, and so forth and are meant to serve as a means of doing anime type characters for CG/3D Graphics.

• Genesis

 

Genesis is a Daz Studio specific base (although can be used with Poser, you need to do some tweaking and such to get it to work) and the original series was useable for both male and female characters.  The second generation of Genesis (2) has specific male and female versions, supposedly to get better pose and higher quality characters compared to the first version.  The same figure base can be used for male/female/children/monsters/etc.

• The Girl

The Girl is sort of a pin-up type model...large eyes, big breasts, Barbie-type figure, and although I did not usually have in interest in her, Brandi Vavoom seemed like the perfect G4 character!

Most of my illustrations use the Victoria series of base models; however, when I read about Brandi Vavoom, I immediately thought of The Girl!  What better character to use as a base than a big-breasted, thin-waisted, sexy girl!?  And so you will see all of these images utilizing The Girl...

So this weekend I'll post my graphical illustration of the stories, but wanted to post some general stuff for basic background so some of you understand WHY I actually went this route, hehehe.

Sex from the beginning...or stretch it out?

So I have been currently on a push by my Muse working on my new "What's in a Name?" story.

For those who missed the recap, it is basically about a former beauty pageant wife who "itches" for that lifestyle again and obtaining titles.  She starts out by participating in bar contests (wet t-shirt, daisy dukes, etc.).  Then I'll have her sink further into less appropriate titles (MILF, MIAF, WILF, WIAF, etc.).

I don't want to give the story away, but I'm at a crossroads where I'm wondering what people enjoy.  I am getting close to the end of Chapter 01 which, not going into the circumstances too much, a wife ends up in a hotel room with another man.  There is no sex involved...they went out, had a good time drinking, and both are too drunk home.

There is heavy build-up of sexual tension, but as I said, there is no sex between them by the time the chapter ends...although the guy IS scheming about how he can have sex with the wife, he doesn't follow through with anything...yet.

So I had planned on him not having sex with her for several weeks (2-3 chapters), building up the tension until it is almost a given they will have sex and it is pretty much expected.

But then I woke up this morning thinking, "What if the wife wakes up half asleep and straddles her husband and suddenly realizes it is NOT her husband!?"

Obviously she is shocked at suddenly impaled by another man's cock but it feels so good they end up having morning sex.

So my question to you, my readers, is what sounds more erotic?  The sex scene is going to happen eventually, but should it be sooner versus later?  Do you enjoy things being drawn out and heightening of the sexual tension, or do you like the sudden "OMG I'm fucking my husband's coworker!" surprise, LOL.

It obviously changes the rest of the story as I was going to use the slow build-up of her teasing the coworker and slowly her giving in to letting him do more and more with her, but I could probably work with her having "mistake sleep sex" with him and then him using it to leverage her into acting more slutty.

I've created a poll gadget to cast your vote, but feel free to leave comments as well--whether you have questions on the story or whatever...but I'm getting close to writing it, so want to figure it out by next weekend!

Thanks for the replies!

Appreciate the shout out from some of you on my inquiry about whether people still come to the site now that Lapdancing 05 was published.

EVERYBODY who replied stated they visited the site more when Lapdancing was being written because they are more interested in that story than Skyrim.  The Skyrim fans were more vocal during the Lapdancing 05 writing mainly so I could finish Lapdancing and start working on the Skryim story, LOL.

Right now I'm in a bit of a "rut" with Skyrim.  As I mentioned I've been pretty disillusioned about getting the game back up and running.  It will eventually happen, but right now I have to garnish up enough desire to do it.  As such, the story is a bit on hold.

Meanwhile I've been working on several other new stories, lately my "What's in a Name" story that I came up with while writing Lapdancing 05.  Right now that seems to be where my Muse is taking me the most, so have been working on it in order to satisfy that desire.  Again, does not mean I'm not working on Skyrim, as I open it and work on a few sections each day, but my main thrust is getting the ideas of this current story sorted out.

I've updated the picture gadget to show some of the early pictures that are inspiring me for What's in a Name...nothing that gives the story away, but at least you can see what I've been using to describe some of the outfits and whatnot!

Hopefully once I get to a point where all the thoughts in my head about What's in a Name is finished I can turn it to something else!

Been working, but not on what I promised...

I've been having an extremely hard time getting involved in my Skyrim story.  I don't want to just skim over it and hand out any crappy story, wanting to take some time in it and flesh it out a bit more.

When I write the Skyrim story I'm also playing the game...so whenever there is dialogue or an attack or anything in the game, I write it down in the same order and sequence as the game.  But there are the 'other' aspects which need a bit more creativity. The main plots follow the game--that of the Dragonborn.  But Cerise is so much more than that and I do not want the plot in my mind to get overshadowed by just putting out any story.

So it's been difficult getting my Skyrim muse to help out...

Instead, I've been looking at a few other stories, and lately have been working on one I left out in my previous discussion in my growing list of To-do's.

This story is currently entitled "Sister Cassandra" and is a sci-fi, paranormal, post-apocalyptic story (quite a mouthful there, LOL).

The premise of the story is everybody gets 'three chances' to redeem themselves to decide whether they end up in Heaven or Hell...so there is a bit of karma and reincarnation involved.  If your first life is bad, and your second life is good, you get a third chance to compensate--the end result deciding if your soul goes to Heaven or Hell as you are weighed upon the Scales of Justice.  Of course there are the purely evil and purely divine who only need two lives (or in extreme circumstances, one) to decide their fate, so not everybody gets that triumvirate of lives...

Enter our protagonist, a woman who was a devout nun in her first life back in Medieval days, and in her second life, became a murdering prostitute/stripper.  With her two lives she has completely nullified both her good and bad 'points' to decide where she goes.  She is a true neutral.

She is reincarnated by an Angel and Demon pair during the seven-year wait before the battle of Heaven and Earth (Armageddon) to discover there is a third 'player' involved with the coming war, which wants neither Heaven nor Hell to win, but instead replace both factions.  This third faction is composed of both Angels and Demons who are disenchanted with the extreme views of God and Satan and prefer more of a 'neutral' rule where they can control mankind and coexist.

As a true neutral soul, she has the inherent capability to enter both Heaven and Hell zones, so is 'recruited' by both Heaven and Hell to thwart the third faction, allowing the true battle of Armageddon to decide the outcome.

So you may ask, where is the eroticism of the story?  Well, we come to find out she is brought back into the world as a succubus.  The reasoning behind this is the only 'middle-ground' between Demons and Angels is of a sexual nature.  Only God and Satan have true control over a person's soul, so in order to circumvent the 'system' they had to infuse a true neutral with the essence of both good and evil...and thus our protagonist was 'born.'

True neutrals are rare--in fact, there has only been one other true neutral in the existence of Heaven and Hell, and that is God.  God created everything on pure neutral terms to let everything just 'pan' out--it was not until Lucifer fell and the Holy Spirit and finally Jesus came into play that 'good' and 'evil' lines were drawn.

As true neturals are basically non-existent, this gives our protagonist an 'edge' no other side is expecting, allowing her to pose as both an Angel or Demon.

I plan on the story following her as she is directed to destroy the third faction in both past and present, using her sexuality to seduce and ultimately destroy those who would fuel the third faction.

She is given several 'powers' besides feeding off sex:

• She can travel through time with the help of her 'overseers' (the angel and demon who awoke her), to stop events from happening that would favor the third faction.  This is one of the inherent 'perks' of being truly neutral--not even Angels or Demons can travel through time as the 'rules' were made to stop all but a true neutral (which at the time, was only God).  As such, she can actually change the course of events to favor one side or another.
• She can only be killed by a demon or angel, but even then, as she is a true neutral, they cannot truly kill her.  When time advances she will still be reincarnated from the beginning...so even thought she is killed in the past, her rebirth is unimpeded and she can go back in time again with the knowledge of how to avoid her death.
• She has been instilled with the knowledge of the past as well as how to use any weapon from the past, so when she travels back she can be immediately acclimated to the time and place she is inserted.

The story is an attempt to "branch out" from the basic stories I've been doing and try something different.  Sort of a whimsical way of venting my creative juices, LOL.  It's also an attempt and sideline project when I'm stumped at my current story (e.g., Skyrim at the moment, Lapdancing 05 previously) to 'clean the slate' in my mind and work on something different.

I'm hoping this will purge the mental impasse I'm having with Skyrim to get the story on the go once again.  It worked with Lapdancing 05, so we'll see how it goes!

This is also one of the first stories I thought about doing 3D Graphics on...long before thinking about Diamond or Annie, as I always had a thing for the "nuns with guns" mentality, LOL, so thought I'd bring it to fruition!

Still plan on continuing with Skyrim, just need this mental diversion to get back on track...

Currently working on Skyrim 03...

So finally dusted off my rough draft of Skyrim Chapter 03 to work on.  Had to rearrange a lot of the pictures I took into some order so as I review the story, I can insert the pictures in as well.  It has been so long I had forgotten the pictures were already sized correctly, so now it's a matter of re-reading the story, making a few changes, and inserting the pictures.

Even with that final part only remaining, it will still take a while to get everything in order...so will let you all know when I have a reasonable update.

Following the insertion of the pictures, the story should be done and I can submit it...but even then it typically has taken a full month before the story is released, so right now we're looking sometime late August, early September before it's make public on Literotica...as I hope to be done "soon" with this story in order to give me some time in August for the next chapter of Annie...

ETA's on stories...

I've received a lot of requests on ETA's for the release of my next Skyrim chapter, as well as the next chapter of Annie, not to mention the next chapter of Lapdancing Girlfriend!

At this point in time I'm not able to give any ETA's, even for the next story coming out, my Skyrim 03 chapter.

Lapdancing Girlfriend Ch. 05 took a lot out of me.  Every moment of spare time I had I devoted to working on the chapter.  I even took days off from work to work on it at times.  I need a bit of recuperating before I can devote some much time and energy into a story once again.

Add to that we're still in the summer months, a time I usually do not have the cycles to burn towards stories.  A lot of my stories are done in the Fall/Winter months as I have more time being indoors and whatnot to work on them.

I'd like to say they will be soon, but even that may not be the case.  Also I have my growing list of 'To-Do's' which I listed earlier...so as the mood hits me, I'll be working on them.

This past week I've been devoting towards my 3D Graphics creations, which have slacked off.  I am still trying to pick through the hundreds of models I have for the proper Diamond character, and then I'll be releasing a render of her for everybody to get their first glimpse of.

In terms of Skyrim, I haven't played the game in months, so will need to get back into the swing of things to work on Chapters 5 and onwards...as well as any additional images I may need for Chapters 3 and 4.  As I've mentioned, earlier Chapters 3 and 4 are written, but I need to work on the images--which is sometimes longer than the actual writing.

All I can say is my priorities are towards Skyrim 03 and my graphics at this point, but I'm still dabbling with a few of my other newer stories to get them fleshed out enough where I can let them sit for a bit to work on other things.

I know it's not what everybody wants to hear, but again, Lapdancing 05 took quite a bit out of me, and I need time to digest and ruminate before tackling anything hardcore immediately...

Growing list of 'to do's'...

So following Lapdancing 05's release, I've been trying to catch up on several things.  I wanted to cover a few things so everybody knew what was going on and what to expect...

The biggest thing is prioritizing and finding the TIME to work on everything!


Skyrim Chapter 03 (Whiterun)

As promised, the next 'big' release will be the third chapter of my Skyrim story--Whiterun.  I already have the rough drafts of both Chapters 03 (Whiterun) and 04 (Ivarstead) completed, I just need to sit down and resize all the screenshots I've taken, and then insert them into the story, followed by a review/reread of the chapter before posting.  Once posted--based upon the first two chapters--it will be close to a month before anybody will see it on Literotica.  I guess illustrated stories take longer to format, plus besides the normal review they do on the site, they also check all the images to make sure they are the correct size and such.


New Stories

I have several new stories I've been working with on and off to take breaks between Lapdancing and Skyrim.  Although I have working titles for all of them, none are close to being complete or fleshed out enough to give everybody an idea of what they are...but I can give the general blurb for each.

What's in a Name
I've mentioned this earlier, but writing a story where a wife is obsessed with titles...so she gets herself into all sorts of situations to lay claim to that particular title.  The first 'chapter' of the story is her entering a bunch of bar contests--thanks to all of you for your suggestions!  So she'll be competing in a Daisy Dukes, wet t-shirt, and various other contests.  To her, winning the title is more important than her propriety...but it has to be a 'legitimate' contest, meaning she is pitted against other people and judged by a panel of judges.

Extenuating Circumstances
This is a story I started while writing Lapdancing 05.  It concerns a young couple where the wife gets involved in several compromising situations due to extenuating circumstances.  It's pretty typical of the 'wife sleeping to pay the bills' types of stories, but hopefully with enough of a twist that people will be entertained.  The first two chapters involve her reminiscing how things got so complicated, so they are more flashbacks than what is happening currently...but by the end of Chapter 02, we'll see what is going on.

Lifeguard Gets Wet
This is a story I started over TWO YEARS ago that I work on every now and then.  It actually started from a Literotica Story Ideas post.  Basically the rich girl gets in trouble and is sent to spend the summer with her former nanny instead of going on a European vacation with her family.  She is sent to downtown Atlanta and forced to get a summer job to pay her way, cut off from her money for the summer...so she gets a lifeguard job.  Unfortunately, the lifeguard group has been a 'boys only' group forever, so they are not happy about a girl joining their ranks...

A Space Odyssey - Galactic Spy
This is another story I've been working on for a long time.  It's about a modern girl who discovers there is actually life out in space.  She is recruited to join an elite agency which polices the galaxy.  Earth is not yet advanced enough to become a member of the Federation of Planets, but that does not stop earth women from being kidnapped and forced into sexual slavery.  It's sort of a mix between the Spacegirl stories, Star Trek, John Norman's Gor novels,  and so forth.  It's more of a novel I've been working on than a simple sex story.  There is definitely sex involved, including alien sex, but there is more story than erotic encounters.

Existing Stories

I still have plans to work on ALL my stories and advance them...right now, it's just time that's needed:

• Annie Babysits the Kids Ch. 08
• Dreams Ch. 03
• Director Jekyll and Ms. Hidesnothing Ch. 02
• Grim Fairy Tales Ch. 03
• Lapdancing Girlfriend Ch. 06

Graphics

I also have been working on getting some of the graphics for my stories completed.  The initial step has been attempting to categorize all the characters I've bought over the months.  I am trying to render them all in the same positions and lighting to see which characters work best in my mind for each of the stories I'm doing.  The first I will be creating is a simple full-body portrait of Diamond...but still working through the 200+ female models I've bought, LOL.  Hoping to sit down with them and pick out Diamond and her friends soon.

Lapdancing Girlfriend Ch05 "After the Fact" comments...

So there's a few things I wanted to share about Lapdancing Girlfriend Ch. 05, now that it's out, I couldn't share before.

If you have not finished the chapter, be advised, these are SPOILERS, so you may not want to read further!

*****SPOILER WARNING*****

 

First, there were many scenes not planned and came about only as I was writing.  The very first sex scene involving Tim is an example.  I was originally planning on Diamond merely being picked up and given a slutty outfit to be worn to the airport and on the plane.  The humiliation factor of being exposed to the public was the sole impetus of the first day; however, as I was writing, I thought, "How could dressing in revealing clothes upset a stripper?"  It needed something to tip it over the edge.

So I thought of her having to face the guy she was forced into having oral sex with--that would be pretty humiliating.  I began to write about him picking her up, watching her get dressed.  Now THAT was something she could get embarrassed about, as it would be within her own home.  

But once again I wanted something "over the top" in terms of degrading her, so figured him taking her in the airplane bathroom would do it.

I do not enjoy pure rape, non-consensual scenes, but I do enjoy if the woman is reluctant or even initially forced, as long as she enjoys it in the end and does not feel as if it were "rape" in the most brutal sense of the term.  That is why I started out with Tim feeling her up in her sleep.  She was already aroused, and that arousal led to her enjoying her rendezvous with Tim on the plane...even if she was against it initially.

The photo-shoots were created 'on the fly' as well.  I did not plan on ANY sex scenes, thinking along the lines of Mr. DeWight that Diamond needed to be slowly introduced into the fold of the porn industry; however, then I realized it would be more humiliating and degredating if Diamond actually was the one to accept her degradation before anybody thought she would.  That she would not be expected to behave in a depraved manner and actually did would be more upsetting to her in the end than writing it off as "I was forced into it" type of scene.

And so came the masturbation scene during her first photo-shoot.

The second photo-shoot was actually going to be her merely being exposed before another naked male model.  I had planned to write in the descriptions of the 'simulated' sex scenes.  Diamond's humiliation would come from being in such compromising positions and the world thinking her more of a slut than she was.  But once again I thought..."what if..." and thus came the actual penetration.  

I did not want Sean to be portrayed as a 'bad guy' so added the misinterpretation of Diamond giving him the 'go ahead' signal to enter her.

The whole "she did not have to do it, but did, and not only allowed it, but enjoyed it" routine played out well in my mind, so hopefully that was relayed through the story.  It's a common theme I'm trying to put into the story, and although I add drugs, alcohol, or her mental state as excuses, those are more or less crutches I am relying upon to make it more realistic on something happening.  To me, Diamond is a strong-willed woman who is not a slut, it is just the circumstances of what is happening to her making her do some of the things she does.  That she begins to enjoy it needed to be somehow explained, so I threw those in to convince you the readers there were extenuating circumstances.

Twister

The Twister game was probably the longest part of writing the story.  I actually created an Excel spreadsheet with the colors, as well as an online spinner with the categories!  I had a list of 100+ Truth/Dare questions I found on the web as well as invented myself.

And then I played the game!  As I wrote the story, I would actually 'spin' the spinner, accepting whatever it landed on to be played out.  If a move was ultimately impossible to execute, that's when the game forfeited.  If one of the guys received a Dare I did not think would happen, they forfeited.

I actually had a lot of Dares with the cum-filled shot glasses...but those Dares never were randomly selected by the computer...and so they just did not happen.  That was both good and bad.  The good was I think everybody (including myself) was thinking something would happen with them or that they would be involved with the story.  The bad was the disappointment of them not ever happening, hehehe...but that's life.  And personally I think the build-up of wondering what they would be used for was as exciting as the disappointment in them not being used.

I played the game until a Dare came where Diamond had to do something sexual, her accepting the "anybody who spins x color gets to touch you for a minute" as the point of no return for her gangbang scene.

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Just wanted to share a few of the "reasons why" and how the story seemed to grow on its own.  Feel free to ask about any other scenes and I can try to relay what I was thinking at the time, or why I picked one guy or the next for certain scenes.

For example, a lot of people wanted Geiger to get more involved with Diamond's degradation.  As I was writing, I thought "Who would be the LEAST likely to end up screwing Diamond" and thought of the computer geek.  That it fit his agenda for showing he "had what it took" to be a field agent added to the story in my opinion.  And now Jen/Diamond is forced to pretend he's her fiance, having sex on a regular basis with somebody she just met is going to be pretty demeaning.

Or will it?  Guess we'll have to wait for Chapter 06 on that one!  ;)

Lapdancing Girlfriend Chapter 05 is LIVE!

Thanks to 'hubnwife' for the head's up...Lapdancing Girlfriend 05 is now live!

Can't wait to hear the comments!

Enjoy!

So what's next?

As I mentioned earlier, my next BIG project will be the next chapter in my Skyrim story; however, that is more logistics than anything.  Both Chapters 03 (Whiterun) and 04 (Ivarstead) are pretty much written in rough draft form, as well as the screenshots taken...the main time consuming thing is I have to resize the screenshots to Literotica sizes (no more than 500 pixels wide) and insert them into the story.

I still need to review both chapters, so there will be a bit of a rewriting here and there, but it's just the pictures which are time-consuming.  So in some ways that will be longer than even Lapdancing 05 where I was writing.  Writing I could find an hour here and there to work on things, but for the Skyrim stories, I need huge blocks of time to work on them.

Just warning people there may be a bit more time involved for those to see fruition than a regular unillustrated story.

I also have several stories I've been working on here and there to break the monotony while writing Lapdancing 05.  I expect one or two of those stories to come out in the next month or so, all depending on how much time I put in.  If I have huge blocks of time I'll be working on the Skyrim story, but when I have only an hour here and there, I'll probably work on those.

And I'm still working on the graphics for all stories.  I really liked the idea of putting them together as an actual e-book with illustrations, so will be seriously considering that route.  I'll post brief glimpses here and there of the images, but the entirety will probably be something to purchase.  Some stories like Annie there is a lot of rehash of previous chapters in the forwards, so will probably have to trim those out, since it will be a book and not a series released at intermediate times...still, I think they'll all flow well.

Then again, they could just be an anthology of chapters...all depends on how the graphics go...

But feel free to bug me on progress of Skyrim 03, LOL...but also give me some time to recuperate from the marathon writing of Lapdancing 05  ;)

A picture's worth a thousand words...

Yes, this is not April's Fools, this is not a joke...LAPDANCING CHAPTER 05 IS COMPLETE!

So some interesting little facts while we wait for Literotica to release the story...

• It is FORTY-NINE Literotica pages long!  Ouch...
• I put it in the Exhibitionist & Voyeur section, although it could reasonably fit into any of the other categories:
• Anal
• BDSM
• Erotic Couplings
• Group Sex
• Loving Wives
• Mind Control
• NonConsent/Reluctance
• Novels and Novellas
• The story is 325 Word Format pages in length composed of:
• 174,603 words
• 795,332 characters (without spaces)
• 969,229 characters (with spaces)
• 4,021 paragraphs
• 15,427 lines

I can't believe it's finally done, already itching to write Chapter 06, LOL, but I've promised to do my next chapter of my Skyrim story next, followed by a new Annie chapter...so Diamond will have to wait.  That's not to say I won't be working on her, as I typically work on a couple stories at a time, but focus mainly on one in order to prevent the stories "bleeding" into each other.

I also want to work on some graphics, as the illustrated story idea has gotten some good feedback.  But all in all, it's time to sit back and let the feedback--good and bad--flow!

Not this weekend :(

About 85% through the review, so at least I'm moving forward.  I've also added about 10 pages (Word format) since starting, so the story seems to be growing.  Although I've removed quite a few paragraphs and sentences, I always seem to find one part that needs a bit more fleshing out to describe.

The last photo-shoot is a good example.  It was only a few paragraphs but I felt it needed a bit more, and wow, I'm quite happy with it (I mean VERY happy, LOL).  It's one of Diamond's girl-girl scenes (gasp).

I did take some "me' time today and watched a couple movies (Taken and Taken 2), as well as did some yard work, but it was time well spent as I could come back to the review fresher and go through it some more.

There's no way in hell anybody is going to read through this chapter in one sitting IMO.  There is something for everybody, and there's going to come a point where you are going to be worn out and have to "resume" after a decent rest (nudge nudge, wink wink).  I'm just hoping the plot itself advances enough for everybody's tastes...I'm not too worried about the sex scenes, but it's what's between them that I hope everybody enjoys!

I've also been thinking about the illustrated stories...and am going to work on some graphics once this chapter is submitted to get a feel of how I'll be doing it, so that's another thing added to my plate, LOL!

Lapdancing 05 Photo Album updated...

Getting close, I've updated the photo album.  Pictures now when organized by name will actually be in order of the story, so you can at least get an idea of the timeline going on with the photos cutting down some of the guesswork, hehehe.

It's about as much of a hint as I can give at this point...but wanted the pictures to actually be on the same timeline...

UPDATE:
Oops, thanks to "Anonymous" for letting me know the album was not visible--Google+ is a bit odd with updating the names of the files so had to delete the album and re-add it, and apparently had to set up sharing for it as well.  Hopefully it's visible to everybody now!

Paying to read...

So several comments and e-mails have me thinking.  A comment was made on how writing was a hobby for me, and since I was not getting "paid" I had to be in the right frame of mind and have the time to write some more.  This not only is for Lapdancing 05, but all my stories, as I tend to do one at a time with a large amount of time in between.  Several people have stated they would not mind paying for a full e-book once a story was completed.

Time lately for me is the big issue.  Summers are the worst, as my free time is extremely limited with little to no time to write.  My kids are up for the summer, there is more going on at work, and there is just general real life chaos going on that the winter months do not have.

Anyways, some comments were made how some of you wouldn't mind paying for full stories when they are completed and it got me thinking.  I read a blurb where Charles Dickens "serialized" his stories...printing out a chapter here and there in the newspapers and when he finished a story, would publish it as a book. All of that got me thinking...

I've mentioned in the past I was planning on putting together some 3D Graphics to go with the stories, making various scenes as I see them and posting them somewhere.  What I was thinking is the possibility of once a story is completed, publish it in its entirety as an illustrated book.

I don't see offering the full story for pay for when you can read the chapters on Literotica.  And short of pulling the chapters off the site (something I know some authors have done and which I have no intentions of doing), I feel something "extra" needs to be offered that you cannot get for free...and I'm thinking the illustrations may be that thing.

I've been illustrating my Skyrim story, but that's been screenshots from the game.  These would be totally original art renders, but would be something I would feel more comfortable about asking money for than just compiling the chapters into one e-book...

What do people think?  Granted I am not the best 3D artist out there, but I hope to make things at least viable.  Just something to think about...and I'm a long way from finishing any of my stories, LOL...

Lapdancing Girlfriend Chapter 05 - COMPLETED

Yes, the words I'm sure some of you thought to never read are here...I have finished with Lapdancing 05!

I'm running through a Spell/Grammar check and will then send a copy off to doflam as promised, while the rest of you have to wait a few more days as I review the story and make a few final changes/embellishments.  I will let you know when it's posted to Literotica...but realize after that, THEY need to review it and eventually post it, so it may be an extra day or two before you see it on the site.

I am both happy and a bit afraid of posting it.  Happy it is done, and I do feel I gave it my best.  My fear is for some people my best may not be good enough...or that I took the story in a direction they were not expecting and do not like.  Or even that it is just too long.

Anyways, I hope you all will enjoy at least parts of it...