Annie Babysits the Kids

This was the first erotic story I wrote, and was actually a rewrite.  I read the story on the Alt.Sex.Stories Text Repository back in the old UBB days of the Internet...so that dates the story!  I believe the original was first posted around 1990-ish.  I had liked the story so much, I wrote my own version.  Being a bit of a stickler for English and a knack for writing, my rewrite I thought was pretty well done, but was different from the original.

The story resurfaced around 1998 by Miguel Owen, the original author.  I contacted him asking if he minded if I rewrote his story and showed him my version.  He liked it so much, he stated it would be nice for me to make it a series.

Oddly enough, his wife found out he was corresponding me and sent me all sorts of threatening messages about his "addiction" and how they were trying to overcome it and pretty much told me if I ever contacted him again, she would track me down and do bodily harm!  He did send one final message telling me to keep the series alive and to continue, LOL.

The story originally started off about a girl who teased some boys that she used to babysit and then they coerced/blackmailed her into having sex with them.  I expanded the theme to have the story be told from her fiance's perspective.  Her fiance loves her very much, but enjoys showing her off.  In fact, he finds watching her (from the window in secret as she babysits) he finds he enjoys seeing other men enjoying her assets as well.  He tries to tell her of his philosophy that there is a difference between love and lust, but she is still shy.  Meanwhile her blackmail/humiliation continues at the hands of the boys she used to babysit.

I held off a few years, being shy to post something so raw on the Internet, but finally bit the bullet and posted Chapters 01 and 02 on Literotica where it received quite a bit of good reviews.  Encouraged, I began Chapter 03, and the rest is history.

I have not written much on the series on over a year, but I DO plan on continuing it.  I actually have several stories I've written on Literotica since then, so will talk about them as well.

Here are links to the stories.  If you like them, please vote for them favorably.  I accept all feedback, positive or negative, but if you are just going to type "you're sick" you need not bother, your post will be deleted.

Annie Babysits the Kids Chapter 01

Introduction to Annie and her trials and tribulations.  Introduces the main characters and how she got into the predicament of having sex with two guys from her old high school and how her fiance discovered what was going on and how he enjoyed it.

 Annie Babysits the Kids Chapter 02

The is a very similar story from Chapter 01, but was written 100% by myself, whereas Ch. 01 was a rewrite.  The original writer wanted to go more hardcore BDSM; however, I did not like where it was leading, so kept it more of a humiliation/blackmail story.  We learn a bit more about her fiance and what drives him, as well as how she enjoys the attention from the other men.

Annie Babysits the Kids Chapter 03

This chapter took me a long while to write.  In fact, I got so much feedback from fans wanting to see what I had written, I relented and released it into three parts.  That's the last time I will do that, as it seems to have missed something with the breaks.

Annie Babysits the Kids Chapter 03a

This part starts off with the boys calling Annie up and forcing her to take them to the mall, where they strip  her in the parking lot and leave her in the car.  They return with a slutty leather outfit they force her to wear as they then all go into the mall to shop for Annie's new wardrobe!  Annie begins to discover she enjoys the attention she is getting dressed as a slut for the two boys.

Annie Babysits the Kids Chapter 03b

In this chapter the boys start showing Annie off to the public and even in stores.  They they drug her and leave her alone in the food court where her fiance's friends find her.  All of them have secretly desired her, and also believe the same philosophy as the fiance that woman are meant to be enjoyed.  There is a different between making love and fucking.  As such, they seduce the drugged woman, where she ends up giving mass blowjobs to all the guys in the mall men's bathroom!

Annie Babysits the Kids Chapter 03c

After her sexcapade with her fiance's friends, the boys pick Annie back up, where she is drugged some more.  The do some more clothes shopping--her smelling of sex and cum--to both her embarrassment and excitement.   Eventually the chapter ends with Annie having a gangbang with several people from the mall in a furniture store!

Annie Babysits the Kids Chapter 04

This chapter Annie tries to resolve the issue of being engaged and a slut to other men's desires.  She still loves her fiance, and the turmoil in her mind is overwhelming.  She then receives a package where she discovered the boys had taped her gangbang in the mall!  As she watched her drugged self on the screen, she is both aroused and ashamed, so goes for a drive to clear her mind.  Events proceed to where she is stared at by some construction workers further arousing her.  Due to the construction, she decides to take her car to the car wash.  She is hit upon by a guy who gives her a "tour" of the car wash where she is put on a platform and taken through the car wash like a car!  At each stage one of the car wash people end up having sex with her, until she has done the entire car wash personnel.  The chapter ends where she is blackmailed by her fiance's friends who took pictures of her gang blow job at the mall!

Annie Babysits the Kids Chapter 05

This is a LONG chapter!  Annie's mind continues to be in turmoil through her actions of being a slut and in love with her fiance, still not believing he could really want her to be this way.  The story changes to the first work day after the mall gang suckfest where the fiance's friends all work together and they tell him about an amazing girl who sucked them all off.  Having read her diary, the fiance knows what happened, and eggs his friends no to tell more and more.  The guys finally state they are having a pool party and that the fiance and Annie should come--them using the pictures from the mall to convince her.  I go into a bit more detail on Annie's relationship with the friends.  Meanwhile she is seduced further by the boys over the week, becoming a complete slut for them, still trying to rationalize this is how her fiance wants her to behave.

Annie Babysits the Kids Chapter 06

This chapter sets up Annie to housesit for the family of one of the boys blackmailing her.  They order her to accept.  She has sex yet again with them...

Annie Babysits the Kids Chapter 07

The long awaited Pool Party which is alluded to in Chapters 04 and 05!  The friends of the fiance have an elaborate plan to get him to leave.  He is fully aware and prepares in advance, so he can watch what happens!  Annie proceeds to be used and abused throughout the entire pool party by all the guys--including two professional porn stars!  The story ends with her fiance returning and telling her how much he wishes she would show herself off to the guys--even to the point of doing something naughty with them.  Still torn that her fiance could really want her to behave like she has been, only behind her back, she ends up making love to him.

Annie Babysits the Kids Chapter 08

This is the chapter I am currently working on.  It is the House Sitting episode where she becomes the true slave of the two boys blackmailing her.  The entire week she is forced to dress like a slut, service the two boys, and general be a sex slave.  I plan on the chapter ending with a birthday party from one of the boys' friends where she is told to treat all the guests "nicely" and ends up being auctioned off to fuck the birthday boy--while everybody watches in on a camera!

 Future Chapters

I have at LEAST a total of 10-17 chapters planned for the whole series!  Her adventures are not over, even though I haven't written about them in a while, I will post here and on Literotica when they are submitted!.